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Growing Pains
by evan m horetsky

Saturday, August 09, 2003

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Though I may be caught by the silhoutte of the view

Bodies found like air, but mind given to few

Mind given only when soul doth breathe true

How different fate would ping if this then I knew

Instead I lust in the hallows and for this

I am lost

Give care like coins and paid the cost

But for those I kept oh so close

Still took and took till they've overdosed

Luckily, though, still I stand

For now free am I from their controlling hands

The theme unknown, yet still I grow...

...old of the ticks of love and soul

Alas, I write of this in heightened intellegence

But still I wake without the jist of it

For though I follow and though i hound

I await the day my queen is crowned

Await the day I'm found.

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Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader) 10/27/2003
Wow young man you write with years untold.. I am very honored to have a son like yourself..You have a rare gift and i am proud of you..POPPY
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 8/11/2003
I am impressed and awed.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 8/10/2003
This is beautiful Evan, heart touching.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 8/10/2003
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 8/9/2003
To wait for true love and to have a taste of how superior it is to all other loves...this is defined justly in your words.

I understand this fully.
Reviewed by Marley Jensen (Reader) 8/9/2003
"Mind given only when soul doth breathe true." An awfully fine line to divide, don't you think? Wonderful writing.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/9/2003
I like this. A thought-provoking piece!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 8/9/2003

As I read....I heard, saw and listened to nothing else around me! Who wrote this... you or your soul? Take a bow~~~applause!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 8/9/2003
Great write, Evan. So what's wrong with being mutualistic?
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