|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|a charming write, I would like to be a bird for a day and soar about, peace|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Super, I circle above, shouldn't be much longer.|
|Reviewed by serenety L
|I love that one!
Pity that a wild bird can never be held in a cage. We would like to have it with us, look at it daily and spoil it. But it would die...
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
I agree with ...Shaw, this is poetry! My favorite part:
"Taking them all in
They teach you about themselves
And you teach them about your ways"
...It rings so true. Thanks--Emilie
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|..so many of us behave like the wild bird..we may all take note and recognize ourselves...indeed an excellent poem!!1
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Wonderfully written, Sara.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is so true Sara...so very true!!
I love to watch those wilde birds!!
As a matter of fact I watch them daily...as I wait by the gates to open at the Lookout Beach in Plettenberg Bay...They are so cheaky...they answer me when I am talking to them or calling them...and there are two seagulls that follows me to a certian parking...and I feed them daily too...I even took Photo's doing it..I will put them up at AD as soon as they are ready!!
I can do bird watching for hours...that is real bird watching ..I know your poem means something more..
I enjoyed reading this..
I left you a note on mine okay!!
|Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
|a wonderful write..Floreann|