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are you satisfied?
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Saturday, August 09, 2003

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are you satisfied
and happy with yourself
why do you have to hide
identify yourself

more of my friends leaving
what do you want of me
i'm tired of the grieving
why can't you leave them be

these are MY friends you hurt
the ones you drive away
at pain, you're the expert
nicest thing i can say

do you want me to go
go the way of my friends
i don't want to leave--NO!!
this madness has to end

are you satisfied
as they leave, one by one
who will be left? tears slide
as author's den's undone

(c) karla dorman, 2003
--------------------------------------------------------------------
to all those who have left, or are
contemplating leaving...

i wish you would come back, i wish
you would change your mind...

o, how i miss you...your words, and
especially your encouragement...

don't ever give up writing...this
is what this person (or persons)
wants to see happen...

i am not going to give them the
satisfaction...


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Reviewed by D Johnson 12/16/2012
Karla, scanning stuff posted from ages past I found this one from 2003...I'm hoping the troubles you described have been repaired.
Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 8/9/2003
well said Karla, in the end good wins out over bad
Reviewed by Sarah Tagert 8/9/2003
Bad reviews wouldn't be enough to make me want to leave, but my friends leave is... I have to give this a lot of thought
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 8/9/2003
**Tears**... Stay strong, yes, my talented friend. Always.
(((((((((((((Karla)))))))))))))
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/9/2003
Excellent Karla..I love your strength here!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 8/9/2003
People like you are the reason why I hang in there,I miss them too very much but we cannot let the one who started all this wreck it for us if we go they win.
I wont let that happen.
Best wishes always
from
kay.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 8/9/2003
Someone has started again? I'm not leaving. I got hurt is the reson I haven't been around.
Your friend.....................Ron
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/9/2003
Good on you Karla...we need to know who this babboon is.....and we must stand together!!

Take care okay!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Jackie Brooks 8/9/2003
Good for you Karla. Don't let the creep win. Jackie <> <
Reviewed by David Alexander, Sr. 8/9/2003
Karla, this is a very good poem, however I have missed the problem of which you write. Send me an e-mail if you will and let me know what is going on. Love ya..Poppa
Poppa1david.yahoo.com
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 8/9/2003
He/she like this. The Mata Hari of AuthorsDen is lovimg all the wailing and sobbing and . . . pain. You're allowing Mata Hari to succeed.
Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader) 8/9/2003
Rock on, Karla, Together we stand united.....THEY fall!
Michael
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 8/9/2003
Karla, We must stand together! Otherwise they win! Great write! ~SH~
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/9/2003
What a sad day this is! This is what the idiots wanted to do in the first place - to breakup authorsden; and we are all allowing this to happen. *sigh*

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/9/2003
(((karla)))

i am NOT giving in, but i am doing this for my physical and emotional health. so many of my friends being hurt; i can't take much more of this.

what a heartwrenching write, and such a sad place authorsden is turning out to be!

god be with authorsden and all its den-zens; y'all are in my prayers and thoughts!

(((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <
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