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Paper Cuts
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

Saturday, August 09, 2003
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She twirled too quickly
in her computer chair,
and felt the vicious slice
of papers thinning kiss
along her forearm.

(I feel swirling, vision whirling,
pain as sharp as nature’s teeth,
whitened hunger, penned with plunder,
agony flares underneath.)

She reacted too swiftly
in her computer chair,
and felt the soothing slice
of papers salting kiss
along her mind’s nerves.

(I feel gifting, ever shifting,
pain as sharp as nature’s birth,
colored hunger, torn asunder,
exodus begins its dearth.)

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/9/03
 

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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 8/12/2003
Erin, I, too, love words, playing with them, maneuvering them, massaging them to tell my stories.. you are so good at weaving words around each other and ending up with a feast for the tongue to read aloud.. you are truly a 'thinking person's' poet. This is so cool! love, katy xox.
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 8/10/2003
LOL...tragedy in the simplist of forms. But how we all can relate to the pain of it. I loved your accounting.
~Jackie~
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 8/10/2003
Exceptional write....I can relate to well...was a printer for many years.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/10/2003
Powerfully written!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 8/10/2003
Erin....powerful and deep write....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Londis Carpenter 8/9/2003
This is great. and I can truely say, "I feel her pain." LOL
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 8/9/2003
I broke out in a cold sweat reading this! lol Well done Erin!

Jack
Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader) 8/9/2003
Shall we say, ERIC,

TRENCHANT imagery!

Well done, bravo!

I especially love the way you intertwine the woman's computereze experiences with yours!

Clever!

Richard

Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/9/2003
Interesting write!...

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 8/9/2003
Original concept, and an excellent write. Enjoyed this very much.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 8/9/2003
That sets one to thinking deep thoughts. Well done.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/9/2003
Powerfully written, loved this..

Reindeer
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) 8/9/2003
I hate when that happens...
-James
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 8/9/2003
Paper cuts is an interesting concept for poem.You have done a really good job with this.I like it.
Best wishes from
Kay
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