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Trish's Challenge: Where Dreams Come True
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Saturday, August 09, 2003

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Trish’s Challenge: Where Dreams Come True




If I could be anywhere,
I would be with you,
In the land where,
Dreams come true …

If I could show you anything,
I would show you,
How true ,
Love could be,
With me loving you…

I would take you to my rivers,
And you would read me gentle poems
Written by our friends,
And I would play you music,
Only your ears could hear…

In this magic place,
We would kiss and hold hands,
And I would gaze upon this man,
And thank the Gods that
I have learned to love again…

We would travel up my mountain,
And I would show you the world below,
And our love would keep us warm
And safe from the snow…

I would take you in my world,
And never let you leave,
Teaching you to believe
In all you see and feel here…

For nothing would be more real,
Then the kiss you feel,
Being placed upon your lips,
And the love I show,
Would let you know,

That beauty and truth exist in the world,
If only in our dreams,
And in this place I love,
So far above the world below…

We would stay here forever,
In the land where dreams come true ,
With you loving me,
And me loving you…

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Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 8/12/2003
A very dreaming poetic expression. I really enjoyed reading and living for a few minutes in this dream. G
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/11/2003
I love the photo and the dream. Great write. Wonderful response to the challenge.
Reviewed by fare good 8/10/2003
Poet of Gods heart, the flow sings its own song. Silent as the doves who flaps there wings. Master poet of God.
Reviewed by Trixie Love 8/10/2003
I agree with everyone...
This is simply beautiful...

Hugs,
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 8/10/2003
a wonderful write, the opening stanza rocks. peace
Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl 8/10/2003
Ohhh so perfect. Beautiful picture too...where is it taken?
Reviewed by Jackie Brooks 8/10/2003
Beautiful, as ever, I hope it comes true for you. Jackie <> <
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/10/2003
Absolutely gorgeous Retta!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 8/10/2003
Breathtaking picture and an excellent write...well i have all the praises for you....BHUWAN
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/9/2003
Absolutely gorgeous poem and picture! this goes in my library!
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 8/9/2003
Yes,this one is really special...sounds like 'love',to me.
Beautiful!
Reviewed by William Bonilla 8/9/2003
A very beautiful write
Reindeer
excellent

William
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 8/9/2003
Beautiful poem Reindeer! Sounds like a wonderful place to me! Beautiful picture!

Jack
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/9/2003
Wonderful write. This is so mesmerizing, you made me want to be there too.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 8/9/2003
Beautiful words of comfort. Makes me want to take a lakeside vacation!
Great job, Reindeer.
Jill
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 8/9/2003
Another exceptional work from you. Bravo. Love it !!!
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 8/9/2003
This is so soothing and beautiful, Retta... a wonderful place to be in, with, and within.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 8/9/2003
As always Rein, beautifully written.
Kudos!

tony:)
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley 8/9/2003
very beautiful..Floreann
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 8/9/2003
Lovely creating of Utopia, Retta! There is, in fact, a similie to such when two people can combine into a single unit who balance each other and wend their way through life... You've got me musing, now! :)
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 8/9/2003
This is truly sweet Retta,,so caring and full of sharing dreams! Great write,,~SH~
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) 8/9/2003
Lovely Retta , so beautiful .... will love to travell all the places with you ... the place will look more beautiful if u are there ... and like your poetry ... the fragrance in the place will make it really refreshing... Kiss for you Retta
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 8/9/2003
How Else Could I Show You,i.e. I Read Betwen The Lines Is How I Know You To Be True!

TRASK
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 8/9/2003
Beautifully written Reindeer!

~Joseph
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) 8/9/2003
I've been looking for this place my whole life.
You've done a beautiful job with this one Reindeer.
-James
Reviewed by John Bidwell 8/9/2003
I'm at a loss for words here.
The picture, the poetry.
My heart has just stopped.
I'm not reading anything else tonight.
This is all I want to see. I'll take this to my dreams.
Wonderful.
John
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