by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
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If a computer can do it, so can I. Hey, got take a break when the stress is on.
My computer just started hibernating,
while I was computering.
Little window said,
"a few lines in your computer were hibernating. Do you want to prevent this.?"
I thought, "what the hell is this?"
Anyway, I learned to do the same,
in this marriage game.
My wife came in running her mouth,
my brain hibernated down south.
She finally shouted,
"Why you acting so funny honey?"
I responded "uh huh!"
then just kept staring out into space,
with a blank look on my face.
I think a "few lines in my brain were hibernating."
as my wife was conversating.
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|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Ha ha ha ha! ROF! You gave me a good laugh. I know little about them... until lately, but I really could relate to this!
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|This is too funny! Is that what that look on his face is? Smiles.... I'll have to remember this...
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Marriage Is An Institution Only In Eyes Of Satan,i.e. Collects Taxes__
Truly (God) Could Care Less as Long As You Cared & Shared And Loved Your Little Children!!
I'd Rather Live Alone Forever Than Be In Misery Of Anothers Company,i.e. Marriage!!!
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Thanks for the giggle Grady...
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Loved this one Grady..
Thanks for making me smile
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|LOL...this is cute Grady...but then again also not funny when taken literally...you and your wife are in my thoughts and prayers Grady!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|you and your wife do NOT need to be fighting! now you two kiss and make up! hope your problems are over soon; you are in my prayers! :( (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn. your expressive nature is uncanny! :)|
|Reviewed by Toris Okotie
|Nicely expressed, memories!!!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was excellent Grady...Loved the expression in this!
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Hope you and your wife will sort out your love very soon and be back in harmony.
Absolutely love this write! Be back soon! I know you've got words all over your brain. Now line them up and write.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Liked tha analogy here...perfect!!!|