Always Remember Love
by Marlene Dawn
Tuesday, August 12, 2003
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One moment in time the sun rises over a hill.
birds sing from a window sill.
Each day a new moment & a beautiful new feeling.
Love of a heart unveiled and revealing.
Always remember love
your beautiful body fitting mine like a glove.
We are butterflies soaring high in skies.
I sit here now dreaming I can fly.
Wonderful power of love in ones heart.
More especially when love doth start.
Three words are said, smiles are unreal.
Never can you forget the moment you feel.
We must always hold the beauty of love.
For it is a gift from God above.
Feeling love once is better than never.
It can lift you up and last forever.
marlene bowring . 2003
Reader Reviews for "Always Remember Love"
|Reviewed by Bill Murray
|Mrlene, a sweet and gentle love filled poem. |
It is written well. Bill
|Reviewed by Peggy Bertrand
|Beautiful poetry |
|Reviewed by karen vidra
|nice write, marlene! so enjoyed this uplifting write! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Great..I really enjoyed this.|
|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|... and I can see why! |
Terrific poem, Marlene. Your rhyme was sophisticated yet simple, but not simple in the sense of immature/childish. Very cute, sweet, and innocent. Love it ;)
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|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Such beautiful, beautiful verses Marlene and so tender...exquisite write!
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|A stunningly beautiful write. Perfect.|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|An outstanding piece of poetry!
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|This is very beautiful! Really Nice!|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Masterful piece of writing.Wonderful read.
Kudos to you, Marlene!
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Marlene, very beautiful poetry. Very exquisite write.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was absolutely beautiful, I loved these gentle and wonderful verses,