Waiting For Me...
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
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*For You My Love...*
Waiting For Me…
It’s a strange feeling,
To have someone wait for you,
To miss you when you’re not there..
To want you with them
All the time...
Strange to have someone greet you
With a smile on their face…
To say they missed you,
And need a kiss…
I’m not use to it..
Don’t know how to act..
Afraid to believe its true ..
Afraid to think its not…
It’s a strange feeling to be loved…
To have someone care for you,
To have them rise up to greet you,
And want to hold you in their arms…
I’m not use to it,
Where’s the catch…
What is it you want from me…
What do you want me to do?
And then I see you smile
“I love you,
Just want you to love me too…”
And my heart whispers,
Please be speaking true -
Because I love you too…
I go to work,
And you wait for me,
And you wait for me to wake…
Every time I leave,
I know that you wait,
For my return,
And my heart burns,
With such love for you,
You love me too…
Do you know what it feels like?
To have someone wait for you?
Its scary and strange,
And so beautiful,
To be loved like this…
I can only say one thing,
You no longer need to wait for me,
I am here and will always be…
My first thought in the morning,
Is of you,
My last thought of the day,
Are my lips whispering to the moon,
I love you…
Now I wait for you…
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|Reviewed by serenety L
|Oh, I understand those feelings. You cannot believe that there is someone just for you, someone who loves you and cares for you.
But sometimes it is real...and should not scare you but give you confidence in true love.
|Reviewed by Digital Fairy
|Beautiful!! Romantic from start to end, great job :)
|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
|This is excellent and so beautiful and superb and so nice and so good and so wonderful and so so so so lovely and so so heartfelt write ....
Nice write Ok
Loved it :)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Reindeer, you captured this feeling so simply but perfectly, and isn't it true that most of the best things in life truly are simple, it is we who complicate them. Bless you and your love and may it last forever, along with your poetry!;-)|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|This is soul touching, Reindeer. Absolutely beautiful.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|beautiful write, reindeer; so well done! :) (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn.|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|This piece is beautiful because it comes straight from the heart.
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|What a beautiful write....it is a dizzying powerful feeling, right! :)|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Oh how lovely this is, so sweet and hopeful yet can feel the undercurrent of strong emotion.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Beautiful, passionate, romantic write! Gives me some idea of what it might be like.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|WOnderful write from you Rein...superb....sunned by its beauty.....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|An absolutely heart warming poem, my dear. What a beautiful picture of love you paint.
|Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
|Another beautiful poem, this time with an optimism and faith in shared love. Jackie <> <|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most excellent write Retta!!
I could feel this one!!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|What can I say?
You always entertain me with your writes and pictures.
|Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme
|delightful write and I'm so glad you have someone to wait for you with all that love :0)|
|Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
|this is precious and beautiful right from the heart..|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|This is a wonderful write Reindeer! I enjoyed it from begining to end.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A wonderful read
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Wow, this is an excellent write, Rein.