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mysterious places survive on the planet
long ago civilizations, remains of existence
Aztec ruins, Inca temples, Mayan calendars
and Egyptian pyramids
each brought thought
or were gathering places
to worship or learn the
knowledge beyond current ages
energy lingers in meridian lay lines
a matrix of thoughts they left behind
new age, new wave, or ancient wise
someone was there in that time
we more than wonder
as we absorb in breath
the exhaled air they left for us
and treasures of cities since buried
will our cities crumble
and look like that
will our memories
to be looked at and studied
by a more modern man
of what was once
upon a time
maybe he'll find a long lost poem
encrypted in our binary code
our ancient technology
hard to decode and determine
the fate of our species
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|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Interesting to pose questions to ourselves as to how the current fits into that unique niche between past and future. Great write, Debby. I enjoyed it.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Thought provoking, fascinating write.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I love when you give us this thought provoking stuff to ponder!;-) Although I am one who believes eventually, it will all be dust, and the new world will be perfect!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I have a friend that feels we will be one of the generations to disappear because of the computer age. Was this the fate of the ones we wonder about? Inspiring write!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Awesome write Debby!!
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Debby....excellent ending to this superb write....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
|Bravo, nicely done.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was wonderful..I loved reading this tonight!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Wow! I love this kind of poetry.
Sad to say, the way houses are built these days?
Well they might last 75 years.
Thanks for your comments. I'm almost 100% well.
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