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  mysterious places
by Debby J Rosenberg
Tuesday, August 12, 2003

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mysterious places survive on the planet
long ago civilizations, remains of existence
Aztec ruins, Inca temples, Mayan calendars
and Egyptian pyramids

each brought thought
or were gathering places
to worship or learn the
knowledge beyond current ages

energy lingers in meridian lay lines
a matrix of thoughts they left behind
new age, new wave, or ancient wise
someone was there in that time

we more than wonder
as we absorb in breath
the exhaled air they left for us
and treasures of cities since buried

will our cities crumble
and look like that
will our memories
remain behind

to be looked at and studied
by a more modern man
of what was once
upon a time

maybe he'll find a long lost poem
encrypted in our binary code
our ancient technology
hard to decode and determine
the fate of our species

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Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 8/13/2003
Interesting to pose questions to ourselves as to how the current fits into that unique niche between past and future. Great write, Debby. I enjoyed it.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 8/13/2003
Thought provoking, fascinating write.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/13/2003
I love when you give us this thought provoking stuff to ponder!;-) Although I am one who believes eventually, it will all be dust, and the new world will be perfect!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/13/2003
I have a friend that feels we will be one of the generations to disappear because of the computer age. Was this the fate of the ones we wonder about? Inspiring write!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/13/2003
Awesome write Debby!!

Take care!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 8/13/2003
Debby....excellent ending to this superb write....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader) 8/12/2003
Bravo, nicely done.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/12/2003
This was wonderful..I loved reading this tonight!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 8/12/2003
Wow! I love this kind of poetry.
Sad to say, the way houses are built these days?
Well they might last 75 years.
Thanks for your comments. I'm almost 100% well.

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