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Time Heals Nothing
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Time heals nothing
It just formats our brain
And makes it empty again
Deleting the history files
Stored in the memories
Of this disc called mind



Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya






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Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Oh, this is wonderful!

Buwan, please submit this to me for the next issue of Canadian Zen Haiku, Winter, 2004.

Thanks,

Richard

Reviewed by serenety L
Beautiful and wise words.
But sometimes time does heal...or at least we have the impression because we suddenly manage to go on with our lifes.
Nico
Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
I like the way you think. Great write!

*Marlene*
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
So true, my friend.. so true.
Jenni
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Nicely done.
Kudos!

tony
Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay
True!
Reviewed by Digital Fairy
Simple yet intensely profound.. Good wisdom here..

--Karissa
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Hi Bhuwan,
Short and powerful...
Much said here...

Your friend
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Excellent, Bhuwan. I've heard that a live brain never forgets, it's just the recall mechanism that goes haywire.
Leland
Reviewed by E T Waldron
You always get to the nitty gritty
Bhuwan!;-)Time is a continuum which no one understands properly, but it does not have the ability to do anything, people just make up these sayings, and they are passed down through genreations. Just like some fairy tales that are very wrong and can be harmful if thought of that way.You make people rethink what they say, which is good!
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
Well put! I have always considered my brain an older model that can only hold so much... having to delete information once in awhile to make room for more. At least that's the excuse I give for my senility.
~Jackie~
Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
makes one think...
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Most excellent write Bhuwan!!

Suberbly done!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
a brilliant outstanding write..Floreann *****
Reviewed by Tami Ryan
A thought-provoking write, Bhuwan. Thanks.

footnote: If we "erase", what will we have learned? (Soak up that rain!)
Reviewed by Hiren Shah
Time heals many things. As for the erasing part, I really wish that could happen. It would be a boon to a lot of people.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Now this is profound and I'm inclined to agree with you Bhuwan.
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
What an excellent reflection Bhuwan.
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Sometimes I wonder about time also. I try to keep everything in perspective though. Your poem reminds me of one of my aunts. She worked hard all her life and achieved, saved her money and the whole nine yards. Then life struck her down. Her money is being enjoyed by someone else now. And her home is also. I think before I let someone take me out of my home at old age when I can no longer take care of myself. As long as I got a finger working. I might burn it. Lets see now, we work hard to better ourselves and in the end we still fall. The perspective here is, we whould appreciate every good second of life and spend our time wisely until that final day. G
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Time and the computer. Interesting combination. Great write.
Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Bhuwan, so right! Time doesn't do it - it's what WE do with the time... If we do NOTHING, then, yes, you get the format effect but if we persevere in sorting the issues as they come to light, and continue doing so until they cease to present themselves, then I guess it's more like a "de-fragging" clean up of our souls!
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Great comparison....I agree with Paul... WHAT a concept!

Thanks,
Emilie
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Bhuwan, very well done. Time is just like a record with a skip in it.
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