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Rainbow Cried
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, August 13, 2003
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She was so excited, she had been chosen!
It was finally her turn to travel through the heavens!
She hummed herself into incandescent fluorescence
As she prepared her ethereally strung plumage.

Feeling the pull of destiny in her skirted clouds
She proceeded to gather her cosmic-hued colors.
Orchestrating influx and outflow of anticipation,
She composed from her inquisitive, chaotic nature.

Billowing allowed screeching disharmonies
To coalesce into thunderous aqueducts of applause,
Leaping fires scribed from her thought-tips
As she sharpened her planetward perceptions.

Waiting for the crescendo to dethrone as it ebbed,
She luminescenced her ultraviolet spectrum into regality!
Sadly, earth saw only her basic beauty, and so, she lapsed,
And cried beseechingly for Life, for one last chance…

Before she passed.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/12/03

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Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 8/14/2003
Erin, this is truly wonderful.
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 8/13/2003
I felt myself standing below, watching her tears. Exceptional!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 8/13/2003
Oh Erin this is beyond words to describe for OUTSTANDING I feel does it only a meager justice!!!!
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 8/13/2003
Wonderfull unique, Erin! Bravo!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 8/13/2003
Erin this is power and excellent.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 8/13/2003

"Rainbow Cried" and so did I, but this time was a pleasing crying…
Happier to see this JEWEL shining! Its lexicon is very impressive,
– the contents, the feelings, the Voice, – everything in this poem…
"Rainbow Cried" is outstanding. It took me over… my mind and my heart were taken by the Eagle of imagination.

I have read and enjoyed a wonderful and meaningful poem.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Christine Morell 8/13/2003
I'm in total awe of this exceptional poem. It's now one of my favourites of yours and is in my library.It's stunning, Erin.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/13/2003
I have no words to describe this one Erin!!
I feeling like crying here!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) 8/13/2003
Bravo, Erin! A surreal, fairy tale-like, philosophical metaphor! I enjoyed the thinking behind it and enjoyed the rich language composing it, as well! BRAVO!
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 8/13/2003
Another festival of words.. Erin, some can splash the page full of words, big and fancy, and there they are! You dip your brush into your heart and your head, design in mind, and paint a mural that feeds the soul.. I must guess that these soul-searching forays of yours must leave you quite exhausted.. You feed my head, indeed! love, katy xox.
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 8/13/2003
Perhaps one should expect beauty when the subject is a rainbow, but you have exceeded all expectations with this beautiful phenomena animation. This is worthy of being mythologized by some deserving culture.
Best regards,
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 8/13/2003
I'm feeling like crying here, Erin... I have no words to describe this, just know that it touched my soul.... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers 8/13/2003
wow, that was a wonder to read, I could feel the pain of it and the joy... great write
Reviewed by Paul Berube 8/13/2003
Erin, very angelic but of course there is no gold at the end of the rainbow. Very well written.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/13/2003
Great write!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/13/2003
Wow! Pow right in the solar-plexus Erin! This is an eye opener, and a fantastic celestial write, beautifully crafted! Kudo's!
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