|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Wonderful acrostic my friend...truly enjoyed it. Excellent write. Away til Monday..enjoy your weekend. Trish.|
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
I'm sure after this poem he won't want to hold anything against you, he'll just want to hold you.
Love has it's ups and downs.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Dear Linda...heartfelt write my friend....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Heartfelt piece Linda!!
Stay strong girl!!
Mail me okay!!
|Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
|You now what...this is...wow!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Beautiful and sad Linda, I believe you will find love once more, you are a beautiful person and deserve beauty in your world,
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|it takes strength to say you are sorry, and it's good for your soul. peace|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Some folks are very sensitive, so I treat them very special, but they have got mad at me.
Hope you've been fine my friend......
|Reviewed by The Gentle Man
|Linda unfortunately because we are all human, we sometimes hurt those we love. I don't think there is any way around it. But we should continue to strive to be the best friend and lover we can be and it sounds like you are on the right path.....smile Thanks for sharing!|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Very nice poem. It takes courage to say you're sorry. Hope all will be okay!|
|Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen
|Beautiful sentiment, with an economy of words honestly expressed. Nice piece, Linda!
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|I think we hurt the ones we love...or should I say..the ones we love are usually hurt because they CARE..it wounldn't hurt if they don't care.. lovely write..
|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Hope this is just a fiction from you. Whoever he is in your heart i am sure you will get him. Love is so beautiful if it has trueness , goodness as happiness. There is no goodness for cheating, lie and hiding. I understood that a lot from the beautiful world of love i had. So u must understand your love. He will surely understand you. Wish you all happiness Linda. Never let yourself down. Give him your love he will surely understand you. Dont be always sorry. Try to understand him.
Love is true and more precious. Whoever you give it ... give it with complete trueness. i am sure you will get back trueness of love. That is what is called give and take. Most of the times love statters when we accept love but never return back. Dont let that happen. wish you all the best. Try avoiding mistake. you are a good heart sometimes.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Hello coz we do I have been
here and near
and I think we all do
we hurt those we cherish the most.
Sometimes Knowing and sometimes blindly..
Yes he will forgive you coz love knows no other way.
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Every Word You, Linda Write Is Not I Vain, Trust Me, (God) Guides Your Hand(s),He Is Here In This Physical World Now_
Wha Cha Cin Not See,Wit Naked Eye, Wha Cha Gona Soon So Instantly Be (come) In His Eye's, Deny, You Cannot,He (God)Is Merciless...
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|so sad, linda; this one touched my heartstrings! >tears < ((((HUGS)))) and much love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :(|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|They say you always hurt the ones you love because you know they are the ones that can handle it. Nice write.|