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(The time has come
to refit the pieces…)

“God, this computer
is dragging butt. Hate this,
thank goodness for

(She watches in fascination as
the colors slowly change-
light blue to green-pause-
two reds-one dark green;
which belongs at the end-gone-
green-red-blue-going well-pause-
back to the beginning…)

“No, dang it, something’s running
in the background, gotta
try shutting some of this crap

(Again, the colors slowly pulse,
hypnotizing in their symbolism
of complexity, soothing
in their steadfast beauty of
self-repair, dazzling, diversified,
to her patterned eye…)

“What a waste of time, sitting here,
watching the process, legend displayed, yet…”

(The pace picks up,
larger patches flash to the
blue of fulfillment,
optimized, beckoning, the allure
of the motion is the inner dance,
captured and mechanized,
a binary life of a different form…)

“Egad, almost done, this takes
forever! There, restart,
redial, verify…and I’m in!

(In the back of her artistic mind,
connections are still being made,
colors are sorting themselves out,
rectangles are aligned, compacted,
she’s been…defragged.)

Erin Moen
Copyright 2003 ©

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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
Oh, my, Erin.. em.. are you saying you had a 'screw loose?' (smile) Sigh.. Good grief you're clever! I'm just sitting here grinning at the idea of "defragging" ourselves.. damn! What a mind! Cool! love, katy xox.
Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
I am with you...I need defragging desperately. and Yuk i hate doing the defrag on my computer it takes forever.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
Hey you found the computer fairy LOL When you're done with it...pls. send my way. Excellent write.
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Terrific, Erin. I've certainly seen this drama before. Excellent write. My question is: Why in the devil doesn't the defrag software shut everything down before it begins. They know it has to start over if something accesses the disk during the process. Drove me up the wall, so I got a defragger that does this.
Best regards,
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
What an interesting challenge of thoughts! Great write.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

"Defrag...Me" is an excellent composition, which instructs and prods thoughts, and provides a relaxing reading.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Erin, well written. The sad part is as soon as you log on again the whole process begins again.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Excellent messages....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
I Hate it when this happens to me!!

Very well written piece Erin!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
LOL...How true, true.
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
A great message for lives, too, but life isn't so easily defragged, huh? Excellent... I hate watching the process, too...
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
I defrag, but never veiw it. I goes to work so I can buy more computers.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
damn Erin, I watched it once and thought very similar things which isn't too surprising considering the source;-)...this is a super write! When you think of it these puters are fascinating....

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