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Closing The Door
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

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* An Old One...*

Closing The Door…

Walking away,
Closing the door,
Not feeling
Anything anymore…

Returning now,
To where I belong,
In the Forest of the Moon,
Where nothing goes wrong…

Going to live among my trees,
And all the beautiful things,
Watch the moon rise,
And see the beauty that it brings…

Closing the door,
Not hearing anymore…
And that’s okay,
This was never right for me

Here it is so lovely,
In the forest of the trees,
Been too long,
Since I listened to them sing…

Missed their beauty,
The truth that lives in their heart,
Will never miss you,
We will never be apart…

You live here with me,
Hope you can see,
All I ever wanted,
Was to see you happy…

And now you can be,
And so will I,
Guess this is the best way,
I could think of,
To say,

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Sad as it may be, I think you have found the way of saying good-bye. Thank you for sharing, Retta. Love, peace, and blessings to you,

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reindeer, this is one fantastic poem!!!
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Closing old doors to open new ones! A great thought and this piece captures that well!
Hopefully a paradise awaits us?
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
I love this, Reindeer, it's how I would have liked to say Goodbye....
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
One of your great writes!
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Retta, beautiful poetry.
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Beautiful Retta...
You have an amazing talent
You and I are alot alike,
my friend. I hide within
myself alot as you do. I hope
we both can reach up to the
stars and not be afraid. That
day will come.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Saying goodbye is never easy. But sometimes it's a must. Great write,,,old or new. ~SH~
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
A beautiful write, full of a truth that it is impossible not to relate with, my friend.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Old but new
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
And a very gracious way too, Rein. Another well defined writing of brilliance!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Fantastic write!!!!
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Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
I love tress myself. We've a lot of tall pines here. Your old work is just as great as your new work. Love & More.......Ron

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