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I Will Terminate This Life
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I will terminate this life
Before it terminates me
With the discombobulated
Dagger of its uncertainty
Because I don’t yearn
To be killed by its mystery
For I yearn to diminish
The velocity of uncertainty
By accelerating the tempo
Of its compressed certainty

Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by Marlene Dawn 8/17/2003
Oh yes...we all have those days...
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 8/14/2003
There is beauty in the words sadly expressed but there is also beauty in life if it is given time to find you.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/14/2003
The sadness in this poem is so deep, so very painful to read, I pray you stay and fight on, beautifully sad,

Reviewed by Birdie Houston 8/14/2003
Makes the wheels of the mind turn gr8t
Reviewed by serenety L 8/14/2003
I just hope this is only a poem and you don't mean it the way you wrote it????
Love your photo!
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 8/14/2003
Excellent word play, Bhuwan. Very profound. Now think about the opposite: if all were certain and there were no uncertainties. Wouldn't that be a bit boring? One might well take the opportunity to end that nightmare.
Best regards,
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 8/14/2003
Bhuwan, don't be hasty...... I really do love your words.... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/14/2003
Your usual brilliant write, I know you know that the main frustration of life is the wait for the next one to begin, but it isn't fair to hasten its beginning;-)
Reviewed by a- maryllis 8/14/2003
Wow! I like this... awesome stuff
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley 8/14/2003
outstanding write..Floreann
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 8/14/2003
Very profound reflections this perfect piece motivates, dear friend.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 8/14/2003
This is very thought provoking sweet friend..
Makes the reader stop in their tracks and reverses throught it again and again.....
I like to thin k you are taking charge of you... In this one.
Bravo clap my sweet friend.
Love n Luck Peggy
{ps watch your email will send info music}
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 8/14/2003
A real play...on words.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 8/14/2003
Bhuwan, excellent verse. Love your play on words.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 8/14/2003
Profound, and Brilliant!

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader) 8/14/2003
Very expresive...very well done...bravo.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/14/2003
Very deep write Bhuwan!!

You made me think deep for a while...and I read it again an again!!

And I liked it..thank you for sharing!!

Warm Love Tinka

Beautiful Picture of you!!
Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader) 8/14/2003
Uncertainty may be a discombobulated dagger, but understanding is not a prerequisite of purpose unless of course we think that we are in sole charge of our destiny... An individual of faith has some yearning toward the fulfillment of something more, like a swelling seed - THIS is compressed certainty! Mere mortals plant seeds, but something much bigger than us make it grow.

Bhuwan, this is a thought-provoking write from a Man who has much to give... Thank you.
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 8/14/2003
Whew - I had to read this one a couple times, Bhuwan. Wowwee... excellent! Bravo!


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