|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was excellent...So many do not take their vows seriously..
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|AWESOME POWERFUL QUESTIONING HERE...LOVE IT!!!!
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|I am enjoying this new work season of Yours... "Vows" is one of them.
"Vows" is not only a - notice kind of warning - but also a good teaching.
I thank You.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Takes all kinds...Excellent write. LOL|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Jacqueline, this is very to the point and a much needed look at by most of society today... thank you for sharing...
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|I just happened to interview a woman for a position with the company I work for yesterday. She has great experience in social services and working in battered women shelters. Talking to her was a wake up call that knocked me off my chair.
I don't want to know the real world...I just don't.
It gave me a new look at vows. People make these vows and they don't know what they are doing or what they are in for.
Vows are good, but too many people are not good enough for them.
Yes...much to think about.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent poem with good points to ponder.
(I pulled my 9/11 post, because the last stanza has mistakes in it. Just wanted you to know that is not how it was written it got messed up in the editor, and I have corrected it).
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Jacqueline, very thought pondering write which we all can think of individually.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Its hard to imagine someone lying at the altar, but it happens. This poem has a powerful hit!|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|UH! Well, this will make one squirm. *grin* Great write Jackie! Not sure many will be willing to spill those thoughts,,lol,,but you sure will make them think about it. ~SH~|