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Dawn
by The Gentle Man
Thursday, August 14, 2003

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At dawn

the untested sun

teases the desolate

sky with her

first rays of light

Like two virgins

fondling each other

with breathless

anticipation

of what the next

few moments

will bring
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Reviewed by Denise Edwards 8/19/2003
This is dreamy, GMan! I love the dawn, the waking of a new day. Love it!
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 8/16/2003
Beautiful write and my favourite time of day. Excellent!
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 8/14/2003
Soft, sweet sentiments for sure.
~Jackie~
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 8/14/2003
Exhilarating, superb you made a believer out of me with this one
Reviewed by serenety L 8/14/2003
Wow!!
That's why I like dawn better than sunsets! There is something erotical about it.
Fantanstic as usual
Love
Nico
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 8/14/2003
exceptional writing!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/14/2003
This is what poetry is all about! Your words painted a superb image!
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 8/14/2003
I love waking up like this..... smile... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/14/2003
So beautiful to read this morning, just so lovely, I love the Dawn..

Reindeer
Reviewed by Christine Morell 8/14/2003
Absolutely beautiful.
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/14/2003
Just Beautiful Gentle Man!!

Today something weird happened...as I looked at the sun there was a full circle like a rainbow around the sun...and I thought by myself..this is the first time I have ever seen that...it was at about 11 0'clock this morning...and at 3 o' clock it was still like that...ddi you noticed that..or is it just my eyes playing tricks on me?

Would like to know!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley 8/14/2003
very beautiful..Floreann
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/14/2003
Wonderful passionate, nature write!
Reviewed by Paul Berube 8/14/2003
T.G.M. wonderful write. This brings a whole new world to life. Well done.
Reviewed by Linda Hill 8/14/2003
~Exquisite my friend..
Loved this.

~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight* Authors & Creations 8/14/2003
What a gentle, sweet return, gentle friend...
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 8/14/2003
What a beauty this is, so good to be reading you again GM.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 8/14/2003
Me loves fondling.
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 8/14/2003
Now this is refreshing moment. Loved this! ~SH~
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