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A Virgin Unveiled by Nia Rose Friday, August 15, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan
If I give, and he receives What if my life he leaves? Oh, to have loved wrong, then have the treasure lost. What a price to pay a twenty five year cost. A gift from me for his delight. What if its quality is not of his sight? Once the veil is lifted, and the prize revealed Will my essence still be gifted after the years it was concealed? If I do give, and his presence is lost How then do I live after the gift was tossed?

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Reviewed by noxolo marcia (Reader)	3/8/2010

must say dats wonderful but never live with (what if) for life won;t de fun live with ther moment




Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen	8/16/2003

Very powerful piece, Nia. :)




Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)	8/16/2003

The best way to get over one, is to find another. [and you will never make that mistake again] smiles...well done.




Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)	8/16/2003

Nicely written well done...now away with all those reminders as Allain has said! :O) ~Nikki~




Reviewed by Tony Nerone	8/16/2003

There are many of us who would not abuse. Well written piece. Kudos! tony:)




Reviewed by Alain Gracio	8/15/2003

Well get rid of everything that reminds you of him. The first step is wanting. Other than that you have a well written poem here. Cheers Allain