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PerfectionCorrection
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Sunday, August 17, 2003
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Perfection is one thing, correction is another. So for correction I do bother. |
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Correction
brings perfection
in
connection
to
relation.
Relativity,
in connection to activity,
brings about change.
There can be no perfection,
but there can be correction,
and
a job well done,
by
anyone
who puts forth the effort.
G
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| Reviewed by Marlene Dawn |
8/17/2003 |
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| Great write Grady! |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
8/17/2003 |
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Truth It Is Rights_ Only (God) Is Perfect_
You, We Are But a Mere Spec Of Dust In His Eyes!!!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/17/2003 |
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| excellent write! well done, my friend! :D (((HUGS))) and love from texas, your friend, karen lynn. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/17/2003 |
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| Well done Grady!! |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
8/17/2003 |
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Powerfully written, my friend..
Take up for your rights..
No one is better than anyone
else...too bad most can't see
that.
~~Linda~~ |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
8/17/2003 |
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I liked what you had to say here Grady..powerfully and bravely written!
Reindeer |
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