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Pain Possessed
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

Sunday, August 17, 2003

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I saw a shallow sea surf by
my place of pain possessed by I.

‘she wallowed in the surfing sea
aware how shallow life could be’

I saw a spiral vortex fall
and lance the pain possessed by all.

‘she swallowed vortex, blood and bone
became aware with quiet moan’

I saw a shining wind looped tight
and wrapped in pain possessed by light

‘she flowed wind-shine into her mind
and knew the pain processed by kind’

Erin Moen
8/17/03
Copyright 2003 ©

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Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 8/20/2003
The seems deep but with a bouncing, non-threatening rhythm.


~Jackie~
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 8/19/2003
Your depth is amazing. Leaves a mind wandering off...just floating. Applause!

Thanks,
Emilie
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 8/18/2003
Fine work of art !
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 8/18/2003
Erin, you've been very 'inside' yourself of late.. layered, solo-sounding. It's producing some lingering moments. Pain ultimately allows us to recognize and rejoice in the 'pain-free'.. you are an inspiring poet, madam. love, katy xox.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/18/2003
awesome write, erin! :D (hmmm..that is a perfect description of me...ran out of my pills, and i am "pain possessed"! LOL) (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :D
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/17/2003
Awesome poetry Erin!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) 8/17/2003
Wicked, wonderful word-weaving, Erin! Very, very interesting and quietly searing. There's more going on with these words than revealed on first read... a sign of good poetry!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/17/2003
Beautiful poetry, but I sense hurt deep inside, hope all is well....
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 8/17/2003
Love the last two verses...
Excellent
PJ
Reviewed by RD Larson 8/17/2003
extremly touching. visually stunning. Thank you.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/17/2003
Enjoyed the rhymes and meters. Wonderful write, Erin!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 8/17/2003
Something to think about.
Wonderfully written!
Kudos!


tony:)
Reviewed by Vicky Jeter 8/17/2003
Erin
The rhythm and voice of this poem read
outloud is exquisite. Vicky
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/17/2003
Thought provoking write.
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