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Pain Possessed
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

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I saw a shallow sea surf by
my place of pain possessed by I.

‘she wallowed in the surfing sea
aware how shallow life could be’

I saw a spiral vortex fall
and lance the pain possessed by all.

‘she swallowed vortex, blood and bone
became aware with quiet moan’

I saw a shining wind looped tight
and wrapped in pain possessed by light

‘she flowed wind-shine into her mind
and knew the pain processed by kind’

Erin Moen
8/17/03
Copyright 2003 ©

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Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
The seems deep but with a bouncing, non-threatening rhythm.


~Jackie~
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Your depth is amazing. Leaves a mind wandering off...just floating. Applause!

Thanks,
Emilie
Reviewed by Birdie Houston
Fine work of art !
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
Erin, you've been very 'inside' yourself of late.. layered, solo-sounding. It's producing some lingering moments. Pain ultimately allows us to recognize and rejoice in the 'pain-free'.. you are an inspiring poet, madam. love, katy xox.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
awesome write, erin! :D (hmmm..that is a perfect description of me...ran out of my pills, and i am "pain possessed"! LOL) (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :D
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Awesome poetry Erin!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Wicked, wonderful word-weaving, Erin! Very, very interesting and quietly searing. There's more going on with these words than revealed on first read... a sign of good poetry!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Beautiful poetry, but I sense hurt deep inside, hope all is well....
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Love the last two verses...
Excellent
PJ
Reviewed by RD Larson
extremly touching. visually stunning. Thank you.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Enjoyed the rhymes and meters. Wonderful write, Erin!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Something to think about.
Wonderfully written!
Kudos!


tony:)
Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
Erin
The rhythm and voice of this poem read
outloud is exquisite. Vicky
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Thought provoking write.

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