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Your Lonely Eyes
by Jack R Roberts
Monday, August 18, 2003

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I donít know where it started
Or where it all went wrong
The only thing I know for sure
Is youíve been gone too long

For you I wanted happiness
You know how hard I tried
But I never could remove
The lonely look within your eyes

Was there something you were seeking?
Something I just couldnít give?
Is it something you have finally found?
In this new life you live

Perhaps someday youíll call me
To let me know that youíre alright
And Iíll no longer wonder
As I lay alone at night

Perhaps I would not be alone
If I had realized
Just what it might have been?
That put the lonely in your eyes


© Jack Roberts Ė August 18, 2003


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Reviewed by A PAX 1/9/2004
your heart is showing!!!
and its wonderful, I adore this one Jack............A
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 8/26/2003
Oh God Jack....So beautiful in its lament...You have an amazing mind....and tender heart.....ty, Dani
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook 8/22/2003
Oh, I pray this one is fiction! Beautifully written, as always.
Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl 8/19/2003
So very sad....great write.
~Kerry
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 8/19/2003
Brought tears to my eyes, exceptional write, Jack. Touched my heart.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 8/19/2003
bravo...well done....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 8/18/2003
Oh my Jack...this just sends my tear fountain over the top tonight...Outstanding Piece of Sorrowed, Heartfelt Poetry!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon 8/18/2003
Wow, Jack! This is awesome. I felt the heartache of the "coulda beens"...and I know how that feels. Great write. ;) Silver
Reviewed by Nancy D. 8/18/2003
This just hit a nerve in me, tears.

Nancy
Reviewed by Catherine N (Reader) 8/18/2003
Jack, such a heartfelt and outstanding write!! Cathy
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/18/2003
Heart touching write.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 8/18/2003
A sad, but expressive write. Excellent.
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 8/18/2003
A well-expressed sad write.
Reviewed by L M (Reader) 8/18/2003
This one says alot Jack.
LM
Reviewed by Regina Pounds 8/18/2003
Excellent. Sometimes all we offer isn't enough.

Gina
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 8/18/2003
A real tear-jerker, here, Jack. Very nice flow of words and sentiment. It's a very good poem.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/18/2003
Even your sad poems are so beautifully expressed Jack! I know this isn't about you, who would dare make you sad;-)!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/18/2003
Now see now you made me cry real bad here!!

My heart is not in a good mood at all!!

Huggs!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 8/18/2003
Oh Jack! ~tears~ This made me cry! Wonderfully penned,,terribly sad. ~SH~
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/18/2003
Beautifully written, and so very touching, one of your best Jack,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell 8/18/2003
Very nice poem Jack. It is sad as Karen said, and I know exactly the feelings expressed in your words because I've "been there". Well done.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/18/2003
so sad, jack; well done! :( (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas.
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