|Reviewed by A PAX
|your heart is showing!!!
and its wonderful, I adore this one Jack............A
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Oh God Jack....So beautiful in its lament...You have an amazing mind....and tender heart.....ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|Oh, I pray this one is fiction! Beautifully written, as always.|
|Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl
|So very sad....great write.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Brought tears to my eyes, exceptional write, Jack. Touched my heart.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Oh my Jack...this just sends my tear fountain over the top tonight...Outstanding Piece of Sorrowed, Heartfelt Poetry!!!!
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|Wow, Jack! This is awesome. I felt the heartache of the "coulda beens"...and I know how that feels. Great write. ;) Silver|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|This just hit a nerve in me, tears.
|Reviewed by Catherine N (Reader)
|Jack, such a heartfelt and outstanding write!! Cathy|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Heart touching write.|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|A sad, but expressive write. Excellent.|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|A well-expressed sad write.|
|Reviewed by L M (Reader)
|This one says alot Jack.
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Excellent. Sometimes all we offer isn't enough.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|A real tear-jerker, here, Jack. Very nice flow of words and sentiment. It's a very good poem.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Even your sad poems are so beautifully expressed Jack! I know this isn't about you, who would dare make you sad;-)!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Now see now you made me cry real bad here!!
My heart is not in a good mood at all!!
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Oh Jack! ~tears~ This made me cry! Wonderfully penned,,terribly sad. ~SH~|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Beautifully written, and so very touching, one of your best Jack,
|Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
|Very nice poem Jack. It is sad as Karen said, and I know exactly the feelings expressed in your words because I've "been there". Well done.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|so sad, jack; well done! :( (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas.|