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The Owl's Call
by Jim Corbin

Tuesday, August 19, 2003

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A couple of years ago, I was blessed with the opportunity to vist my Aunt in New England. She is a special person who raised 14 children. Over 200 relatives helped her celebrate the 50th year on her farm. I wrote this for her.

 


 


The Owl's Call


 


In early days she took his arm


as life began upon the farm


 and often in the twilight's charm,


 they heard the owl call.


 


There is no pleasure on this earth


that's greater than the joy of birth.


Each life is precious, for its worth


the pain you must befall.


 


So each year, as the family grew


hard times were plenty, good times few,


but through them all they both knew


the treasure of it all.


 


And the sand flowed through the glass.


 


Yes, life was full of love and charm


as each child grew upon the farm.


They were taught well, and spared from harm.


Each one grew strong and tall.


 


He was so strong in mind and will,


yet sometimes when the night was still


he'd feel that he could not fulfill


the dreams that he'd recall.


 


Yet no one then would ever guess


that God had just begun his test,


He didn't give them time to rest.


Life wasn't fair at all.


 


So often when they felt the pain


they found a way to ease the strain,


and listened to the sweet refrain.


They heard the owl call.


 


And twenty years had passed.


 




Still as he cried at what he found,


she wept inside, without a sound,


the night when their whole world burned down.


She just endured it all.


 


And still our God demanded more


as children were called off to war,


but faith was stronger, as I'm sure,


they heard the owl call.


 


There's so much pain one must deny.


It does no good to ask Him why


when sometimes God let's children die.


It does no good at all.


 


Forty years had come to pass.


 


Some days bring sunshine, some days rain,


since he was ridden of the pain,


now she alone hears the refrain,


her faith won't let her fall.


 


My memory reaches out to find


a gentler time, a space divine


when life was cherished in my mind,


but I didn't hear at all.


 


Still when I close my eyes a while,


I often sense her quiet style,


and then I see her gentle smile.


I hear the owl call.


 


Gone fifty years, alas.


 


 

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Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell 8/25/2003
What a truly lovely and moving poem Jim. Very personal tale of two people whose life together apparently brought them happiness and more than their share of pain. How wonderful that you could be there with your Aunt on the farm as she celebrated fifty years of days, nights, and a wealth of emotion.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 8/25/2003
Wow.
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 8/19/2003
An excellent piece of work Jim. Bill Murray
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/19/2003
This was so lovely and wonderful to read..a beautiful tribute to someone so special in your heart..outstanding,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 8/19/2003
Oh Jim this is truely a perfect precious write of tribute, so touched I have been by this splendid piece!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 8/19/2003
Good god, Jim, I've got goose bumps flashing up and down my arms and neck...this is magnificent, truly a joy to read, bringing out emotions with every turn, but always with faith at its heart. I applaud you, and bow to this amazing song of heart! Have you submitted this anywhere? I've recently been sending poetry to Chicken Soup for the Soul and I think this would set them on fire!! Check out Chickensoup.com, if accepted they pay $150.00 with all your rights kept by you, but it's not about the money, Jim, this piece needs to be read by many, not stowed away where it may fade from sight... In fact, it would probably blow a similar piece I did for my husband's parents 50th Wedding Anniversary out of the water! I'd love for you to read it, if you are so inclined. It's called Amazing Strength, I presented it to them on July 23rd when we were back in Wisconsin on vacation, it brought tears to their eyes, the best accolade I could have had! Whew, man, you really got me going, really, though, I am so moved, I'm blabbing...unusual, that!? ;)
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 8/19/2003
This is a touching and excellent tribute. Wonderful!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/19/2003
Beautiful tribute. Very heart touching!
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 8/19/2003
Jim, I know your Aunt holds these words next to her heart. They were very beautiful. ~SH~
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/19/2003
(((jim)))

another beauty--enjoyed your story-poem

excellent form, presentation, meter, rhyming...all combine to make a perfect write *BRAVO*

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/19/2003
A fabulous write, Jim! This is a charming write indeed!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

P.S. I have sent you 2 e-mail, submitted 2 poems to your site. I hope you'll get them in time. If not, next issue will be alright with me too. :)

~ SA ~
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/19/2003
Splendid write Jim!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 8/19/2003
A wonderful story-poem. A pleasure to read, Jim.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 8/19/2003
Great Write.
Kudos!


tony
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 8/19/2003
Fabulous rhyme and flow, Jim. You are a master poet and I admire your work very much.
Hugs and Love,
Jill :)
Reviewed by john zimmerman 8/19/2003
jim,
an excellent job ---

it flows well -- solid craftmanship

good write
john+
Reviewed by Paul Berube 8/19/2003
Jim, this is done with love and excellence. Beautiful write.
Reviewed by Christine Morell 8/19/2003
An absolute joy to read. I love the rhyme and flow also.
~Chrissie
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/19/2003
This is a splendid write, a joy to read!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/19/2003
excellent write, jim; truly enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)
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