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| Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick |
8/23/2003 |
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| Very nice |
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| Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) |
8/20/2003 |
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| A very nice walk through sunset and twilight, a sensory delight with a few restrained cinematic visuals...! It was a joy to read. |
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| Reviewed by Marco Landi |
8/20/2003 |
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| was wonderful see it with you |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/20/2003 |
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| Had a few'catches' in the flow. Really like that last line. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
8/20/2003 |
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| Susan, outstanding piece. Excellent imagery. Gave such a peaceful feeling. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
8/20/2003 |
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| One of your many good ones! |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
8/19/2003 |
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Such beautiful writing Susan, for it just flows and flows!!!!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
8/19/2003 |
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| Simply excellent writing...... |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
8/19/2003 |
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Just beautiful, Susan. I was there and saw it just the way you wrote it.
Best regards,
Leland |
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| Reviewed by Vicky Jeter |
8/19/2003 |
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Susan
This rhythmically melts from top to bottom. Lovely texture. Vicky |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
8/19/2003 |
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I especially liked:
"The evening shadows like shades
Pulled down at the close of the day"
Lovely! |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
8/19/2003 |
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"doilied clouds" such a sweet and enchanting expressionl
Beautiful work Susan |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
8/19/2003 |
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Absolute lovely writing, Susan. I enjoyed it.
Kudos!
Lyf
Tony:) |
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