|Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
|Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
|A very nice walk through sunset and twilight, a sensory delight with a few restrained cinematic visuals...! It was a joy to read.|
|Reviewed by Marco Landi
|was wonderful see it with you|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Had a few'catches' in the flow. Really like that last line.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Susan, outstanding piece. Excellent imagery. Gave such a peaceful feeling.|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|One of your many good ones!|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Such beautiful writing Susan, for it just flows and flows!!!!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Simply excellent writing......|
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Just beautiful, Susan. I was there and saw it just the way you wrote it.
|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
This rhythmically melts from top to bottom. Lovely texture. Vicky
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|I especially liked:
"The evening shadows like shades
Pulled down at the close of the day"
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|"doilied clouds" such a sweet and enchanting expressionl
Beautiful work Susan
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Absolute lovely writing, Susan. I enjoyed it.