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Passing By My Neighborhood
by Ron (sketchman) Axelson

Wednesday, August 20, 2003

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Art by me. Kind-a tired tonight, not at my best.


When youíre in my neighborhood

stop by and love me, I wish you would

Every inch of your body is incredible

Iíll kiss all your skin tasty and so ate able

When you enter through my door

soon we can make love in our favorite place,

on the kitchen floor

Then Iíll make you an awesome dinner

we can make out like weíre a couple

of beginners

I can do the dishes another day

now we can turn the lights low and play

but I will move those dishes away

and lay your nude body on that table a certain way

Baby relax and let me say

Iíve craved your desert for too many a day.


Ron Axelson
©8/20/03
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My neighborhood
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Reviewed by Lynn Barry 9/4/2003
Quite a change from your usual...very adult and well done...(but I love the quirky stuff the best)...keep it all coming our way...cuzz you're talented...
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 8/29/2003
LOL...now that's a hot one!!!
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 8/27/2003
You naughty boy Ron....on the kitchen floor?
why not the bed? too cold on the floor.
Smmmmoooottttcccchhhhh
I loved this sketch,you rascal you,and the poem was delightful and made me smile big and wide.
I have to go now and read your last ones as I missed them.
(If you must do it on the floor at least give that dear woman a pillow!)
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/26/2003
Hi Ron:

I've tried to contact you on your message board, but every time I clicked on it it says the page was not available. So I'm leaving you a note here.

The package was sent out late because of the blackout. It should arrive to you on Wednesday (August 27) or Thrusday (August 28), that's what I was told by the post office clerk. It is in an oversized envelope. Please let me know when you have received it. Thank you!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/26/2003
wow..excellent sketch and poem Ron, what a neighborhood..

Reindeer
Reviewed by Regina Pounds 8/25/2003
Hmmm...what a neighborhood! Such heat in your kitchen, Ron. Is it a brick house?

Gina
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 8/25/2003
Very different and entertaining Ron. I enjoy this different piece of adult work by you. The sketch is excellent, you did a good job but where did you get my wifes photo from? hehe jusk kidding. seeya G
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/24/2003
How nice this is!!!!!!!!! Ron, wonderful sketch and a great poem!!!!!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 8/23/2003
Holy cow!!! Nice neighborhood ! Super sketch!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/22/2003
(((ron)))

my, my, my, my, my...WOW

sizzling sketch, sizzling write...as if it's not already hot out there, also in the apartment A/C went out...you hadda heat the den up too :)

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon 8/21/2003
Grrrrrrrrrrrrr.....this was a hot dish. (I am soooo sorry, I just 'had' to say that!)lol. ;) Silver
Reviewed by William Bonilla 8/21/2003
Kool sketch
excellent write

William
Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta 8/21/2003
Love the sketch, and the poem is very sexy and passionate!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 8/21/2003
Ooooo my Sketchy this is too darn sizzling cute...I love it!!!!
BUT
The kitchen floor hmmmm??? How about if it's linoleum we use a lil crisco oil too??? ;O)
Ha I made you smile, but I'm still not going to divulge what it is for!
Really I have totally enjoyed this one Ron!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 8/21/2003
Ron, what a beautiful. No wonder you want her to stop by. Great idea my friend. Very well done. A poem for the loves of your life. Bill Murrray
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes 8/21/2003
On the kitchen table, eh? Now there's a man after my own heart.
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 8/21/2003
Sketchman! My address is....... sigh.... smiles.... wonder why you're so tired.... grin... excellent write...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/21/2003
Love to see what you do when you wide awake! Wonderful passionate write. A man that does dishes? Your a treasure!
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 8/21/2003
Wonderful poem...and super sketch. Hope you get some rest soon. ;-)
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 8/21/2003
Why is it they do not have a category for erotica? This was a hot one.
Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra 8/21/2003
Beautiful sketch. I loved your poem!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 8/21/2003
fantastic write and superb sketch....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 8/20/2003
Loved this, Ron... especially the table bit..*wink*
Hugs
Jenni
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/20/2003
You sketcheroo got Tinka all hot and bothered, with your write;-)Send her a map of your neighborhood;-)Great work Ron!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/20/2003
YO!!!

You Romantic You!!

This was just stunning Ron!!

Betta tell me your neihborhood...I am lost!!

And I'm playing with tha crocodiles......show me tha way....hehehe!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese 8/20/2003
wow, this poem is just fantastic! great sketch also...
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