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| Reviewed by Mark Mahoney |
8/24/2003 |
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| Loved the flow of this, very well done, take care...Mark |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
8/22/2003 |
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ah, I hear this one so clearly, beautifully expressed, I loved this,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
8/21/2003 |
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Wonderful write Pamela! Love the rhyme!
Jack |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
8/21/2003 |
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Start dancing girl! If he can't keep up, welll........... excellent expression here... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
8/21/2003 |
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Such a sad and lovely write BUT DO DON THOSE DANCE SHOES AND START TO DANCE AS YOU WISH for this is a wonderful writing accomplishment!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader) |
8/21/2003 |
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| You've said it so well! We all need the dance.... |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
8/21/2003 |
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| Pamela, lovely write with a sad longing. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
8/21/2003 |
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| What makes this poem so difficult and sad is there seems to be no silver lining to be had. But buck up, silver linings come in all assorted sizes and seek you out even when times are at their worst. Hang in. |
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