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Autumn Breeze (Revised )
by Denise Edwards
Thursday, August 21, 2003
Rated "G" by the Author.
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My first ode to Autumn |
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Cooly and crisply , you rustle thru the trees
I anxiously await thee, Autumn Breeze!
Whip at the ground
Disturb the fallen leaves!
They dance in glee
A welcome to thee, Autumn Breeze!
Whistle at me, you tease
Billow my skirt, you flirt
I've missed thee, Autumn Breeze!
Campfires and candles shudder & weave
As restlessly, upon them you breathe
Rouse thyself, Autumn Breeze!
At the dawn of day, I love to greet thee
Thru my open window, flow in
to start the day with me
As the night graciously flees,
Refresh me , Autumn Breeze!
Your season is here, we'll celebrate with cheer
And many harvest dances and revelries
A toast! Welcome back, Autumn Breeze!
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
11/26/2003 |
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This is a splendid, image filled gem....Autumn is also my favorite time of year. I believe I have written more work with Fall references than any other season.
Good job, Denise |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
8/26/2003 |
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a most colorful poem, I love Autumn also, because it's the start of football season hehe.
"A welcome to thee, Autumn Breeze!
Whistle at me, you tease!
Billow my skirt, you flirt!" I really liked this part. peace
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| Reviewed by The Gentle Man |
8/25/2003 |
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| I love Autumn too! Well said Denise! |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
8/21/2003 |
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Ahhhhhhhh this makes me want and yearn more for Autumn to hurry up and arrive...a excellant image filled piece so beautifully poetically penned!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
8/21/2003 |
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| I love this beautiful tribute to Autumn, Denise, it's my fav. season too. |
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