|Reviewed by June Thompson
this was just brought up the other day...
im working my way up the ladder.. 13th indeed
never was a lucky number.. I saw a bus today.. number 13 to Normal.. made me laugh
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|john bidwell, you are absolutely correct and luckily this was written from memory not from recent experience|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Wow this is an impressive poem, well penned, Sue.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Geez sounds a lil bit like me after one to many arguing with myself there in the beginning...lol. Indeed this is a great, clever crafted write!
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Sue, great write! Stay kewl!|
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|Wow, what a ride...but too sad.
This packs a lot of powerful "Life stuff."
It just burns me up that there are so many angels out there trying to hold on to creeps.
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Wow, Sue! You can't make this up, can you? Great write. Hope it's fiction.