Confusion In Words
by The Phantom
Thursday, August 21, 2003
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Poetry in motion, come get lost lost in this ocean, word by word my thought form nouns and verbs.
Poetry in motion come get lost in this ocean,
Word by word my thoughts form nouns and verbs,
Crashing like waves, forcing my pen to be brave,
Writing from the heart, this jebbish I call art,
The words form a maze, I get lost in each and every phrase,
The clouds are dark, but a light burns forever in my heart,
Love in my eyes, but hidden by a mask I've grown accustom to with time,
True feeling never seen, emotions lost in a beauitful scene,
Tears and fears combind in one, like a total eclipes of the sun,
Heartbreak and pain one in the same, tis the phrase no pain no gain,
Thoughts running free, someone please help me,
My mind like a puzzle, my pen will never wear a muzzle,
More words clog my mind, I need to sleep but who has the time,
Each poem I start, seals another crack in my heart,
Piece by piece they come together forming a poem that will last forever,
I use the pen to write what I see, but she does what she wants in spite of me,
So I let her go, now she's happy fore she's in control,
Do as you will, write what you feel,
Snow covered mountians, drink from love's golden fountain,
From start to finish this poem been a blurr, that's why it's called Confusion in words.
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|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Enjoyed the flow and beauty.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Now this was some excellant poetic confusion in words I would love to be lost in any time, and yes I loved the imagery!!!!
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Yes, I've had those days, too! Great write....
|Reviewed by L M (Reader)
|Excellent write this one is.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Beautiful Matt, just so wonderful to read this morning, so glad I saw you here!
Excellent as always!