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Do Apples Fly?
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

Thursday, August 21, 2003

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Should she set it aside?
Where comes this pain?
Immutable thud, last refrain.
Do apples fly? Is she insane?
Oh, bitter mind…

(Wasted thinking, untimed rhyme…)

Would it do any good?
Would it make her grow cold?
The future’s gone past,
like apples with wings.

(…jungled meanings, time to die.)

Is she once again mute?
Is a world lost to her?
Apples don’t fly.

(Oh, brittle mind…)

Erin Moen
Copyright 2003 ©

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Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 8/22/2003

"Do Apples Fly?" is a profound writing that has a clear picture, but at the same time it is a little esoteric.

"Do Apples Fly?" strikes imagination, and magnetizes the thoughts of the reader, that is how I feel. I need time to get the eight translation of it.

This is a very impressive poem. "Do Apples Fly?" makes me think deeply.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/22/2003
excellent write, erin! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley 8/22/2003
very good pen..Floreann
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 8/22/2003
Very unique, thought provoking.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 8/22/2003
Interesting write, fun read.

Reviewed by Paul Berube 8/22/2003
Erin, lovely write. These are funny thoughts projected by a brillant mind. Well done.
Reviewed by Londis Carpenter 8/21/2003
Actually I have both seen and made some apples fly, and It takes neither insanity nor magic to do so. There's a story here somewhere, but it will keep. Great poem. Lonny
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 8/21/2003
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 8/21/2003
Erin such excellance in poetry comes from wothon your mind, and this piece is another gem proving just that!
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 8/21/2003
Hahaha, thanks, Leland, I needed that! :D

Cracks and sores and darkness fine
brings out Poets bitter wines.
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 8/21/2003
You do the cutest things when the gremlins have got you in their clutches. Of course, fruit flies, not in the past, either. Banana skins, too. In fact, when they get together ...
Best regards,
Reviewed by Marvin Kirsh 8/21/2003
Dear Erin-I enjoy more and more of your poetry. from whence I once looked for meaning in "flying apples" remains only an intended jigsaw puzzle, a false start, a runned race in which i not as assumed a plausable contestant words that only partly match....a jigsaw puzzle "growed" into neither round, square, flat, flat or 3-D"pieces of a puzzle" now a "pie without a crust"(in on old poem of my own Keep the Bear from laughing". Witness to the truth is the only cure-myself some other scientist-and lots of other people and meanings-yet you need to know for your own suffering"s sake-some people touch their sores instead of just letting them heel
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 8/21/2003
Erin.. if you have just one little crack in your head, may I gently peer in.. your poetry, your rhyme schemes, the rhythms.. I gotta see what's in there! Jaysus, you're writings would leave the masters blubbering from lack of self-esteem! Damn, you're somethin'! love, katy xox.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/21/2003
Most interesting write Erin!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/21/2003
Interesting thoughts and write.
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