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Our Love Will Last Forever...
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

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* For you my love, Hope you hear me clearly...*

Once I thought,
I would never love again,
Never choose to have a friend,
Didn't see the need,
To make my heart bleed,

Stayed in my forest,
Living the life I love,
Missed having a friend,
But knew it wasn't worth it,
In the end…

Then I heard a voice,
Crying in the night,
I tried so hard to ignore it,
But it touched my heart so deeply…
I found I had no choice…

I followed the sound,
And saw you there,
All alone,
Sitting on my lovely stone,
Head buried in your hands,
Gentle tears on your face,
And I wanted to embrace you,
Tell you, "wait I am here-"

But my heart was full of fear…

Knowing your lovely heart,
Would tear my wall apart…
I tried to walk away,
But you bid me to stay…

Just talk to me,
God, couldn't you see
What your tears were doing to me?
Making cracks form in my heart,
I didn't want to start,
Caring for you,
But what could I do?

The more I listened to you,
The more I realized,
Your heart was true ,
So beautiful, so lovely,
My God…
What made you…?

You told me your dreams,
Your loves,
Your hopes for the future,
The love in your heart for others
The beautiful love you have for your mother…

I came to love you,
So slowly,
So carefully,
Holding back a piece of me,
Keeping it safe,
Waiting to see,
If you were as real,
As me…

But every word you said,
Filled my heart with dread-
For here I found a man,
Who made me forget-
I was dead…

I have found my soul again,
My heart has began to beat,
My hands tremble when I hear you speak,
And I love how you have begin to teach
Me to trust again…

But it's your laugh,
That makes me smile,
I love it so fresh and pure,
So beautiful to hear in my heart,

My love,
We shall never part,
I shall carry you forever in my heart,
And hear your sweet voice echoing at night,
In my dreams...

I love you,
I shall love you forever,
And never forget the first time,
You whispered to me;

"Can I tell you something?
I love you babe,
Want you always near,
Protect you from your fear,
I will love you even if you don't love me,
But would love to see,
You say you love me too…"

Well, baby,
Will this do?

I love you…
More than my own life,
Will always love being your wife,
Now and forever,
I will never
Forget that one day,
When I saw you,
And you saw me too…

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Reviewed by Christine Morell
This touches the heart and soul. Truly beautiful, Reindeer.
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
I love this one! Beautiful poem and a beautiful picture to match it.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
"Our Love Will Last Forever..." an oustanding picture of a true heart's feelings.

It dances under the sounds of love in a very inspiring way. "Our Love Will Last Forever..." may every couple say.

I thank You for sharing Your tresures.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
beautiful write, reindeer; truly enjoyed this masterpiece! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
What a thing of beauty, a pure pleasure to read.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
True love abounds ... this is so beautiful!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
You just know how to touch my heart Retta...and you did it once more... < < <Tears>>>
If only they would listen hey!!
I just adore your speaks to me!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Retta...gem... world class write...sth to be treasured forever!!!!
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
Retta! This is absolutely breathtaking. Such depth of feeling!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Retta only a blind and deaf fool could not hear and see you and this beautiful touching excellant romantic write!!!!
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Romantic You!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
If he never heard this then he's a loser
Reviewed by William Bonilla
A fantastic write ... Reindeer
Wonderful reading

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
I love your writing Reindeer! This is Great!

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Beautiful, my friend..
I hope you have found
love in your heart..
Awesome poem!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Reindeer, these words are ringing in my ears... excellent..... I love your writes...
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
See, those woods had a surprise for you?
Awesome as always............
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Well Reindeer, this poem is a love song! Well done, as always!
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Oh, my dear. How exquisite to read. Kudos!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
This is beautiful and hearth touching. Great write!
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Another touching and wonderful write Retta, well penned...~SH~
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Amazing write, well crafted.
Typical write of yours, Rein. Outstanding!


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