|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Good poem on a good topic Sara but the scansion goes astray at times. I'll make a copy and you can get some of that advice on technique you tell me off for offering free ;)~ (but only to friends)
|Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
|a great write..Floreann|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Well penned, can feel the strong emotion.|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|life's a bitch and then you die <---Hate that saying really!
Enjoyed the rhyme Sara.....good to read you once more....thanks, Dani ;)
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Reality is usually very lonely and dark. A place where I do my best to stay away from. Good write SG....~SH~|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|very beautiful write....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Yes Sara drowning in reality...but thank goodness I can still swim...but I need a lifejacket...do you have a spare one for me??
Okay!! Do take care my friend..!!
Thanks for the shoulder to cry on!!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Lonely is a sad word, reality is a promise.
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Excellant penning of expression and feeling in this one...I LOVE IT!!!!
|Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
|Nicely done, enjoyed every word, bravo.|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|I'm here, but could you turn on the damn lights' it's dark in this here den!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A beautiful Write