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Edge of Reality
by jing javier

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...rough...and tough...

Iím stranded on the jagged edge of reality
clinging to the echoes that drawn in mist of midnight
teetering on a mirage of self-awareness
striping away memories yellowed with the varnish of time
mired in the fog of denial
shackled to heartbreakís tarnished dreams
wondering if I will ever awake from this nightmare
and query why it is that I am not asleep

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Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 10/23/2003
The last line sums it up, doesn't it. Also, I wonder why the edge of reality has to be jagged. It's bound to cut. There is so much in this poem, I could go on and on but I wont, except to say that it is well written and the pain and anguish that we suffer from time to time is accurately portrayed.

Love, Mom xoxoxo
Reviewed by jude forese 8/22/2003
excellent introspective write...
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 8/22/2003
Excellant and raw, such power of expression here in this one Jing!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/22/2003
Powerful..felt this one deeply, loving your poetry here..

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 8/22/2003
"Edge of Reality" is flowing from the dream's stage to doubtland. It is as esoteric as real, and its definition could be "a quest for happiness".

This poem, "Edge of Reality" provides good reading, while strikes imagination.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 8/22/2003
Jing this is a powerful write, one of your best.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/21/2003
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Sleepless nights...geez!!
Thats when I write my blue poetry!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 8/21/2003
Great metaphors here
Have a great night.........
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 8/21/2003
I lay awake most nights wondering the same thing.... exellent write...
In Spirit,

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