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The Tune Up A Tale Of Erotica (AC) Collaboration
by Floreann Cawley

Friday, August 22, 2003

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It was such a hot June day
When I drove my car
Into your shop for a tune-up
I could not take my eyes off of you
Quickly I glanced up and down
And I smiled in appreciation
I had the most powerful
Of bad intentions
You picked up a wrench
And how I wished it were me
That you were touching
My heart raced
As my mind undressed you
You shot a knowing glance
My way and moved closer
Drops of sweat
Running down you ,your cheek
I reach out and wiped a drop
And put my finger to my lips
Tasting the saltiness of you
Your hand dropped to your crotch
Eyes begging, pleading
I moved closer to you
Unbuttoning your shirt
You reached for my buttons
I slapped your hand away
I was in control here
I dropped to my knees
And quickly released you
The pleasure on your face
Said you wanted more.
You ran to the window
Putting up the Closed Sign
You pulled me close
Not feeling my resistance
You hungrily kissed my lips
Skilled mouth moving, moving
I felt my heart quicken
I wanted you like no one before
We decided to get into the back seat of my car.
It was so exciting you and me in the back seat.
'I was on top of you your strong body so soft and smooth
and you started to gently moan.
Then you turned over and you were on top of me I could
feel the weight of you.
Passion was mounting, we began to sweat and it seemed
as if we were melting together.
You began to move a bit faster the pleasure on your
face was showing.
I began kissing you deeply and whispering to you for more.
Sweet kisses dripping down.
Our moans now were getting louder and the urge was so strong.
Your arms around me tightly as we moved to the rhythm, a song played
on the car radio so softly.
Gently we rocked back and forth the feelings so intense inside of us.
Soon, so very soon it was like an explosion occurred.
Now, you sweetly smile back at me as I kiss your cheek so tenderly.

Floreann Cawley
Maryfrances Perez

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Reviewed by A PAX 8/23/2003
now thats service!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/22/2003
My glasses are all steamed up and my Pc is foggy...wonder what Virus was That...doing it to my body!! Hehehehe...must be "Oilfever"
hehehehe...great write Wow!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Christine Morell 8/22/2003
Phew..a great collaboration.
Reviewed by Dale Clark 8/22/2003
Did anybody turn the AC on? ;)
Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra 8/22/2003
Excellent write!
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 8/22/2003
Need my tires rotated!
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/22/2003
Hmmm what garage was this? I think I need a tune up :-) Great write!
Reviewed by Paul Berube 8/22/2003
Yes, definitely need the AC after that one.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 8/22/2003
Excellent write.
Kudos to you both!
I really do like your styles:)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/22/2003
Oh my...This was job you two!

Reviewed by MaryFrances Perez (Reader) 8/22/2003
Flore, seems we can get into trouble when not kept busy lol maryfrances
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 8/22/2003
I may never look at a mechanic in the same way again! *grin* Or maybe I should look at one! Great write! ~SH~
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley 8/22/2003
Sometimes it's fun to be bad..LOL
Floreann..Maryfrances had fun writing this one with you..LOL
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