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  Darkness
by Sara Coslett
Saturday, August 23, 2003


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I stand on my dock in silence
Watching the sun dip down.
Shimmering on the water
Is a bright glowing ball of energy.
I am losing myself in reverie.
Sadness is stabbing at my heart
Over memories of you.
I cry out a wish for all eternity.
Let your light remain with me
For my heart beats for our love.
As my thoughts drift on the still air
I dream of what could have been,
Drawing from what was.
The sun has vanished now.
Lost below the horizon.
And you, like the light are gone.




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Reviewed by Gary Gebert 9/24/2003
Great title to a great image of words. As the dark falls, so shall our love.
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 8/24/2003
You have expressed well those moments between suns suttle glow and darkness... the silent longing we often feel. Kudos, dear lady.

~Jackie~
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott 8/23/2003
This one brought tears to my eyes...I can feel the pain, but the picture and the poem allowed beauty to shine through the pain. Best wishes to you! ~Z~
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 8/23/2003
Excellent!!!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 8/23/2003
Sad, but excellent writing..
Beautiful picture.....
Reviewed by jude forese 8/23/2003
but what a beautiful haze it leaves...
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/23/2003
Hi Super Girl:

You have turned a sad situation into a beautiful write, just as beautiful as the picture. Very creative indeed!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 8/23/2003
I sense a part of you in this poem.
I liked poetry that can bring a tear.
"The sun has vanished now.
Lost below the horizon.
And you, like the light are gone? take care.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/23/2003
This is a superb poem and photo. Just thought you should know that my post last week,"To A Dead Scottish Poets Society" was deleted with no explanation, or whatever. perhaps I should put it in the blog, hadn't thought of that;-)Hope you read it there.
Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers 8/23/2003
this is lovely, water is the life giver... great write
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 8/23/2003
Whomever this lucky person is to have your love, is indeed very lucky. I just hope you find the happiness you heart desires. A great written piece of poetry, Sara.


tony:)
Reviewed by J. Murphy 8/23/2003
Love your lines: "I dream of whaot could have been, / Drawing from what was" and at the end with the light and sun. Beautiful imagery and those great lines, J.
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 8/23/2003
Sara, Let me first say, it's nice to meet you. And yes,,I believe we may have lots of things in common.
I liked this write and the photo are beautiful..Lisa
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 8/23/2003
I know you miss my mouth, huh- did that come out right?
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/23/2003
Most beautiful Picture Sara...You are so blessed to have that right there with you...its a gift from God Sara!!
My heart bleeds with yours....you are not alone...I am still alone with you my on this one Okay!!

Love Tinka

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