The Tide of Life
by Alex A. LeSueur
Saturday, August 23, 2003
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The ocean was her lover and had her captivated by its movements |
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She was walking toward me,
Wet sand caressed her bare feet,
Warm seawater surrounded her,
I called out, "I am the Tide of Life."
Beconing her sensual thoughts,
Sheer lace glimmered in the light,
Pale moonlight casts a spell,
Abstract images swayed in unison,
Rising higher wiht each motion,
My warmth held her captive,
Mesmerized by my soft voice,
Saying, "I am the Tide of Life."
She remained still, eyes closed,
Her arms outstretched, wanting,
Waiting for my warm embrace,
Passion burned wihtin her soul,
Wanting to savor my strength,
Feeling her desires reach out,
"Release me! Let me feel love!"
She took a deep breath, "Yes!"
Passion swirled all around her,
The warm water rose higher,
Embracing her, caressing her,
Saying, "I am the Tide of Life."
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| Reviewed by TheEnigma OfLife (Reader) |
8/24/2003 |
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Welcome To The Den Alex!
This is a lovely passionate write, speaks in many tones and I look forawrd to viewing many more of yours!
.TEOL. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/24/2003 |
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| very very passionate... well done! |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
8/24/2003 |
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Welcome to the Den they make fun of me that I am the Walmart Greeter... I just like making people feel at home. This was a very beautiful poem.
Look forward to many more.
Lady Peg |
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| Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers |
8/24/2003 |
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| we were all children of the sea once and now week seek to return to it in many forms... I like this poem... it says thing to me of a home of water.... good write |
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