by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
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Sometimes the last laugh could end up being on you. This poem is only symbolic and not about me personally.
During my upward success traveling around,
I ran into this clown,
He didn't make me laugh,
not even for a half.
I pushed him away,
and hurt his feelings that day.
I told him right in his face,
that his humor was really a disgrace.
As the years past,
my success didn't last.
My life took a sudden disastrous turn,
and I did learn,
that you should always treat people as kind as possible,
because your life could really turn to be really horrible.
On the way back down,
I ran into the same clown.
I needed his helping hand,
but the clown took off and ran.
As he retreated,
he seemed glad I had been defeated.
The clown got the last laugh,
on my crying begging behalf.
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|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful write Grady! Yes, we must always be kind to people.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by L. Kolenich (Reader)
|Nice write. . . not an easy thing to recall, no doubt. This kind of admission takes courage. Sometimes the most painful lessons make for the best writing. Thanks for sharing a unique moment in your life.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|ya ya...I am one of those clowns that got pissed off by another clown....but I am still smiling...even in pain.
It hurts so bad that it leave a scar so deep it stays forever!!
|Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
|But then there are clowns whose jokes go too far. Excellent lesson.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Excellent Grady, I loved the lesson here, beautifully taught!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|damm clowns ;) ... very well written parable...|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Have missed you ..
This is very good.
I always say God gets the last laugh
for he said it too.