|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|A realistic picture. Excellent.|
|Reviewed by Karen Dunn
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Such a sad write, but so powerfully written.
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|Wow this is difficult to read.
It is so sad to know that absolute hell is just the normal routine for some people.
This poem is telling it like it is, but whoever would strike a spouse is probably beyond reason.
What a precious heart you have Linda.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader)
This is a wonderful write.
I love the ending as it is 100% the truth..
"The most painful scars you give
Come from within"
Great write here with a wonderful message.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh!! Linda...you hit home with this one...ben there...know the feeling...the scars are so deep within...they are much bigger that the one that meets the eye!!
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Well spoken painfilled write Linda...really grabs you hard! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|This piece was extremely well written. It makes one more understanding of the many hatred things in our current lives.
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|A painful, powerful write, Linda. So very well done!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This one I can relate all
to well to this is excellent emotion and
message dear friend.
|Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen
|Oh Linda...This one really touched a nerve and spoke to my heart. Your last line was the clincher...and the most true line of all. Excellent poem...I recommend sending it in to a contest. A hands-down winner.
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|A great write Linda on such a bitter subject. You've a wonderful heart.