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|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
i always read you, but don't always have time to comment
love the lines
"...so introduce yourself to me
show me how it be
show me how you feel
show me how you deal
show me what's real..."
i agree--emotions laid bare, for all to see
that's what i love about your writing--no b.s., you lay it all out on the table
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|I read you Steve! Actually, I enjoy reading a variety of writing/poetry styles/forms and subject matters! It makes for exciting reading experiences.|
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Your a straight shooter Steve! When I do read your writes it's very enjoyable! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|I read you every time you post. I never thought you wanted feedback. This writing was very well written. You exposed yourself of need. Nicely done.
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|I read you when I am around... Wishing you well|
|Reviewed by Alain Gracio
|You are wasting time and space! I think you know why they don't read you|
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Never read you before, but after this read, I'm gonna! (Not sure if there's an underlying current here, but I like your style.) I especially like this:
"so introduce yourSelf to me
show me how it Be
show me how you Feel
show me how you Deal
show me what's Real
Some real emotions here - I could feel every word. A powerful write. Bravo. Bravo!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|couldn't agree more...|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Wonderful thoughts and viewpoint Steve, Stop by everytime I see your name up..Love your poetry!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|I do read you night Steve.|