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Martian Observations
by Pamela June Kimmell

Monday, August 25, 2003

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Seeing Mars so clearly in the early morning sky this morning brought to mind an observation or two....haha


That orange orb up in the sky
Has captured everybody’s eye
‘Tis closer now than been before,
Can almost see the Martian shore!

Does life exist somewhere up there?
Do they have orange skin and bright green hair?
Do they peer through scopes back at our planet?
And wonder “does life live there I wonder - now can it?”

But maybe they’ve visited us on other occasions
Invisibly attended our earthly celebrations
Perhaps they landed in your back yard?
Sent you that mysterious birthday card?

Some say they’ve visited us for years!
To spy and mate and fuel our fears!
That would explain a lot, I say….


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Reviewed by Janet Parker 9/2/2003
Oh, Pam, this is just too fun, creative, wonderful for words! The last line is a kicker and made me have a big belly laugh. There might be a few of them hanging out in that tea room. Loved it, Hon!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/26/2003
so funny, this is! you are a HOOT! LOL (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. LOL at karla's review!
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 8/25/2003
Hahaha, love the punch line, Pam, totally suprised me! :)
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/25/2003
(((hee hee, pam)))

this is a ::scream:: sorry 'bout that, felt a cold hand on my back *dang my twink*

this is a hysterical write! thanks for sharing!

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

mars is kewl :)
Reviewed by jude forese 8/25/2003
he must be really spaced out ;)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/25/2003
LOL love the way you ended this one!
Reviewed by J. R. Corbin 8/25/2003
LOL!!! Hey! I think I know him....somebody keeps levitating the tires off my car!!!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/25/2003

Scientifically, your poem is so thought-provoking. (This is because I had written a short-story "Moon Walker" about Martians. Yes, I also think that there are martians. One cannot think that just because we, the earth people, need air to survive, then others do too. The martians might not need air to survive, they might need something else.

The "Mars Pathfinder" that we sent to Mars in 1997 could just be well landed on a desert in Mars. Who knows?!

Your write is very funny and thought-provoking. Enjoyed this!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 8/25/2003
Ha, ha! Ho, ho! Hee, hee!
Begone worthless man from me.
You're a hoot AND a hollar, Pam.
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