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| Reviewed by Julie Wyatt (Reader) |
8/26/2003 |
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Josie-
I don't think I've ever read thunder described so well as you have done here. A very moving piece. |
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| Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) |
8/26/2003 |
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Fan-TAS-tic write, Josephine! I love the phrasing throughout...
"the majesty it demands
rumbling the sinews of our marrow
striking the core of our heart beat
reminding us
of
the raw power that abides in the sky"
Incredibly terse and arresting description of the phenomenon that goes beyond its mere physical effects! Great! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
8/26/2003 |
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| Thunder here too. Exciting to look at .... in the distance. Like the poem. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/26/2003 |
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(((o, josie)))
i can't praise this write enough--WOW
awesome descriptions, awesome write! *clapping* this is one of your best!!!
it's thundering out there now as i'm typing this review
so good to have you back where you belong--i've missed you
((((HUGS)))) and much love,
karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
8/26/2003 |
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| glad to see you back, enjoy your thunder anytime. |
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| Reviewed by Rodney Bohen |
8/26/2003 |
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Josephina,
An insightful write underpinned in layered depth. My compliments extended...I'm awed...
Rodney Evan Bohen
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/26/2003 |
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Powerful write Josie!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
8/26/2003 |
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Great write Josie! I love thunder & lightning! We just had a big storm last night.
~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
8/26/2003 |
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I used to sleep to the sound of thunder, till I realized it was lightening that caused it... lightening scares me... thank you for sharing such an intense write...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/26/2003 |
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| captures the intensity of it all... |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
8/26/2003 |
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Hi Josie:
It is so good to see you again. Wonderful write and great imagery. Powerful indeed!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/26/2003 |
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| We had that too Josie and you described it perfectly. It's so good to see you , please stay around! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/26/2003 |
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| wonderful imagery in this write, but thunderstorms terrify me, especially when they are overhead or the thunder is especially loud! sooooo glad to be reading you again; you've been missed here at the den! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your (storomphobic) texas friend, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
8/26/2003 |
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| Wonderful imagery! So happy to be reading you again, Josie. |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
8/26/2003 |
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The thunder-storms in Outback Western Australia.....are amazing....they make the hairs on the back of the neck stand up sooo high.
This poem is truly great....you capture the feeling of thunder so well....Great to see you...where have you been? :op
Ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
8/26/2003 |
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| Josie, well done. The storm sure does get our attention. |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
8/26/2003 |
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| Thunder and lightning have so much power! A thunderstorm is an awesome thing. Great write! |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
8/26/2003 |
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Excellent, Josephine. Having recent experience with a very close lightning bolt and accompanying explosion, I relate to the poem very much.
Best regards,
Leland |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/26/2003 |
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| Great nature write! Thunder can be so exciting! |
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