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Haggards' Halls ( Part VII )
by Paul Berube

Wednesday, August 27, 2003

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Darkness pales a guiding light
and whispers claim eternal night.
To walk in patient careful step,
of every turn, one be adept.

These secrets I've entrusted you,
example leads by what I'de do.
Set your path and follow through,
fail and meet your Waterloo.

Consequences, I must stress,
hear all facts and stay abreast.
Being first to make the grade,
gets you lost in life's charade.

Heed the words you've heard from me,
future's aren't your destiny.
Now you'll feel the life that crawls,
upon stone walls of Haggards' Halls.

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Reviewed by Sheila Roy 11/7/2007
Love the Waterloo reference...certain death indeed.

Sheila
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader) 6/4/2004
Paul...I am really enjoying this...Fletcher B
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 9/2/2003
Excellent Paul!
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 8/28/2003
This series has been most enjoyable to read.

~Jackie~
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 8/28/2003
Superduper work with this series Paul!!!!
This series really is something I could read and read it again, never growing tired of it!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 8/27/2003
Your work never disappoints me.
Excellent!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/27/2003
This is a great series!
Reviewed by Lisa Gibson (Reader) 8/27/2003
Lovely! I love the rhyme and meter of this poem. It's hauntingly beautiful.
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 8/27/2003
Paul,
I really enjoyed this, there is a lot of depth and truth behind the words in this write. Be it intentional, or unintentional(because I know this is a series you are working on) but it is there! Bravo!

Hugs,
Maria
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 8/27/2003
Superb write. Enjoyed!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 8/27/2003
You know how I adore antiquity in language Paul....You're a poet perfect....ty, Dani
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 8/27/2003
You have a good series here Paul.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/27/2003
Great meters and rhymes. Wonderful write Paul! I enjoyed this very much!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 8/27/2003
Excellent continuation, I've enjoyed all of these.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/27/2003
Heed the words you've heard from me,
future's aren't your destiny.
Now you'll feel the life that crawls,
upon stone walls of Haggards' Halls

Hauntingly beautiful written Paul!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 8/27/2003
Paul....clap clap clap....superb!!!!
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