|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Oh yes, nothing with beauty comes without price. The proverbial thorn in the side!
Wonderful write, enticing!
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|again, Marco, the Pain/the Beauty and how you capture one with the other, yes, and again the sybolism, ahhh, yes! Such a beautiful flower, the rose, and always...its thorns...
beautifully done, so good to read you once again...
|Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
|A painful experience of love lost, the thorns remain to remind us and maybe to help us to treasure, protect and value true love when we find it. The Tea-bag lady! Jackie <> <|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Beautifully written and deeply moving.
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|..it's strange how unrequited love gives us pleasure..I've often wondered why so many poems have been written because of the pain etc. what is it in our humaness that requires pain to know love..I ask you..is that love or is it just desire gone haywire..and so we cry..why?..Why indeed...
Beautiful write..you have an enormous capacity for love....
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh this was so beautifully written, so very painful, excellent,
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Oohh, wonderful wordsmithing, Marco! I see depth, shadows, movement and color in this marvelous little piece! :)|
|Reviewed by Victoria Murray
|Fabulous write, Marco! Thank you for sharing it!
|Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
|... love hurts: well said!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Been there. Great write!|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Sometimes even a thorn in the heart
from the one we love is better than having no trace of them.
Your poem tugged at my heart and reminded me of long ago.My thorn is still in tact, can't remove it,part of me now.Your poem touched me,deeply.Beautiful words.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Lovely and deeply emotive.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Marco, such anguish I feel the pain from the thorn, a superb write!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Bittersweet...but beautiful Marco!!
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|A truly beautiful and bittersweet write. Loved the idea of personal pain as compared to thorns...is an idea that can be utilized in many ways and forms!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|This is beautiful, and bittersweet
"You left the thorn
to bleed inside my heart
so vulnerable to ridicule
was I the foolish chaser"
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Thorns penetrate but can be taken out. Can i help with this pain? I'm so sorry here with you reading this.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Love this. Marco! I like especially that last stanza.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Your title drew me in....and your most creative verse did not let me down....beautiful..and bittersweet.....ty, Dani|