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| Reviewed by Patricia Gomes |
9/5/2003 |
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Zen-ish; I like this one very much. This line: "...We sit where both saints and sinners have sat..." is almost a rebirth, that's where I most feel the Zen of your writing. Wonderful!
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| Reviewed by Jane Buttery |
8/31/2003 |
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You bring us in to the monastery with you and we see its' peace.
Thank you
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| Reviewed by Vicky Jeter |
8/30/2003 |
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Hi Gwen -- Gorgeous climax to this end.
Vicky |
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| Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick |
8/29/2003 |
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| I will think of this on my next monastic visit. |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
8/29/2003 |
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Excellent,really well expressed.
Best wishes always
from
kay |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
8/28/2003 |
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A very inspirational poem, Gwen. Thanks so much for sharing!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
8/28/2003 |
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This was outstanding, so beautiful and inspirational,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
8/28/2003 |
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I'd Spent 1 Week . Saint Vincents College
Monastary,PA-If Nothing Else Peace Of
Mind(s) Fills The Air!!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
8/28/2003 |
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"A Monastery Visit" does good for all...
It made me go back three stages of life and come back on the wings of imagination.
An excellent reading. This poem, "A Monastery Visit" is instructing, inspiring and pleasing.
An erudite WRITING.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
8/28/2003 |
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Excellent write
inspirational
enjoyed reading
William |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
8/28/2003 |
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| This Gwen is absolutely beautiful. I read this twice to make sure I caught every thought and prayer. Thanks for sharing this! ~SH~ |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/28/2003 |
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| Gwen this is a premier write, beautifully expressed imagery! I was there I even joined the prayers! |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
8/28/2003 |
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Very inspiring piece of work.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Victoria Murray |
8/28/2003 |
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Fabulous poem! Thanks for posting it!
Hugs,
Victoria |
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| Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi |
8/28/2003 |
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Monastic zoom on the predicament of man.. Bravo, Gwen!
Nevine |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/28/2003 |
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Profound and inspiring Write!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
8/28/2003 |
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| This was spellbinding, Gwen. I adore old sacred place such as this. Such a pleasure to read. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/28/2003 |
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| Very inspiring write! |
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