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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
8/30/2003 |
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| Terrific write! |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
8/30/2003 |
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Exceptional poetry,Excellent!
Best wishes always
from
kay |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
8/30/2003 |
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Absolutely riviting! What a gem!
~Jackie~
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
8/30/2003 |
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| this is very good, it breaks away from the norm, which I so very like in a poem. well done Retta |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/30/2003 |
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| one of the best poems i have ever read by you (and all are good!)!! outstanding job, reindeer! *clapping loudly* (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
8/30/2003 |
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yes indeed a big WOW
excellent write
William |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
8/30/2003 |
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Reindeer,
WOW MiLady
Tis a jewel so excellent.
"Their story forever stored in
The cybernetic world,
Devoid of all the rage
And love it once contained,
Now forever trapped
In an electronic journal
For all to see… "
Lady peg
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/30/2003 |
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Explosive write Retta!!
Wow! Girl this is a masterpiece!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi |
8/30/2003 |
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Your best, Bravo!!!
Nevine |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
8/29/2003 |
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| REtta......i am with Eileen here...perfect!!!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
8/29/2003 |
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| Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/29/2003 |
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| a very focused, powerful poem... |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
8/29/2003 |
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WHOA!!!!! Retta! This is awesome write!!!!! Enjoyed this a lot, my friend!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o) |
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| Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader) |
8/29/2003 |
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More!, Retta, More! This is an epic that must be told!!!
Epic: "An extended narrative poem in elevated or dignified language, celebrating the feats of a legendary or traditional hero."
Fits don't you think?
Excellent, well done!!
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/29/2003 |
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| I agree this is explosive! Great write! |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
8/29/2003 |
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| I agree with Eileen.....Vivid and in your face...Wonderful poetry.....thanks, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) |
8/29/2003 |
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Excellent write along with a beautiful picture great dear ... nice thought and good work ...
LOVE AND KISS FOR YOU ...
Thanks |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/29/2003 |
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| WOW! Reindeer, This is explosive! Exceptional imagery! Brilliant write! |
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