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Homophone Poem (Katy Walsvic's challenge)
by Jenni Kalicharan

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I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it.


Katy Walsvic’s challenge.


How fair is it to pay such a high fare?

Oh dear! Do I dare..

hire a limo to appear higher in status?

But for their wedding I must be there.

Claire had made it very clear to me,

That she and Ron will not run away.

His heart she had won, and today they will become one.


In the church they are greeted with lots of cheer

From family and friends, each already seated in a chair.

The seats are in rows each adorned with a rose.

They sing songs of praise and listen as the preacher prays

And sings a special hymn for her and for him.

After they were wed, they walked down the aisle,

With only thoughts of their honeymoon isle.


By the time they ate, it was after eight,

Left this place for their honeymoon after a meal of plaice.

First they rode on a carriage along the road,

Such a beautiful scene, they had never seen.

Then from the plane, they looked down upon the plain,

Soon, they were able to see the sea.

They both gasped as they saw their boat,

The one at the quay, with the golden key.


For some days before, in a daze she had been,

While he, during the whole ceremony, thought only of a hole.

Now she needed him as he kneaded her breasts.

She couldn’t bear the mosquitoes on her bare chest.

But they decided to ignore the ‘biting insects’,

And concentrate on their need to ‘bite in sex’.

It was an ‘honor’ to ‘offer’ all that he had,

And all night he was ‘on her’ and ‘off her’.

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Reviewed by Russ Okamura 9/4/2003
This is most creative and you wrote it with that passion of your awesome artistic style!
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 9/3/2003
A wonderful effort ,you did perfect job of it....I could not even attempt it...too hard!
Reviewed by Christine Morell 8/31/2003
This is excellent Jenni. You met Katy's challenge so well.
~Chrissie xx
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 8/31/2003
nicely done, challenge met I'd say
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 8/31/2003
OH, Jenni.. you are an absolute dream! (smile) What fun! You have packed this with homophones and given us a cool story too. Thank you so much for this.. once they get rolling, it's really fun, isn't it? (grin) This is really cool! hehe.. love, katy xox.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 8/31/2003
Very well done:)))
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/31/2003

This was so very good Jenni!!

I this Katy will love it!!

It gave me a "Jol of a lol"..hehehehe!!

love tinka
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 8/30/2003
Well done!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/30/2003
Jenni, great response to the challenge,long time since I've seen something with homophones, Katy is perfect for these with her satire;-)!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/30/2003
This was a wonderful response to the challenge, so fun to read and enjoy!

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers 8/30/2003
oohh my, this is really good, .. enjoyable to read.. great write
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 8/30/2003
This is really food and Katy will be so happy.
Lady peg

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