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| Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi |
8/31/2003 |
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Innocent and beautiful. Who does not like that? I was told that Nevine means a snowflake in French, LOL!
Thank You!
Nevine |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/31/2003 |
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| beautiful poem... maybe, a variation of the last line to be more effective? |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
8/30/2003 |
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Yes....I agree totally with that,I love snow.
Beautiful poem indeed Ruby.
Best wishes
from
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
8/30/2003 |
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Ruby,
Yes it does i love watching snoflakes.
This is beautiful and mesmerizing to read.
"And captivates our thoughts
Even if for a moment
But that time which it takes to fall
Encloses in it eternity of some sort. "
Lady Peg
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