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dammit (revised)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Sunday, August 31, 2003

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dammit
how could U do this
your hatred showed prejudice
your actions showed cowardice &
dammit
how dare U attack
U struck us behind our back
we feel tha awful impact &
dammit
we all askin why
why so many have 2 die
your hatred makin us cry &
dammit
souls stepped into space
their lives instantly erased
in nightmares we see their face &
dammit
tha twin towers fell
pentagon a damaged shell
your terror put us thru hell &
dammit
lost flight ninety-three
loved ones caught in tha debris
a horrible tragedy &
dammit
we livin in fear
& holdin our loved ones near
images in our minds sear &
dammit
that september day
we remember in dismay
innocence U snatched away &
dammit
U had better pray
tellin U, U gonna pay
cuz it aint gone be this way &
dammit!!!!!!!!

"always remember and never forget"

(C) karla dorman, 2003


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Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth 9/14/2003
Powerful, Karla. This poem is filled with piss and vinegar but it tugs at the emotional heart strings of us all. Well done.
Reviewed by Sarah Tagert 9/3/2003
it would be next to impossiable to forget the images in my head from that day
Reviewed by William Bonilla 9/2/2003
An awesome write ... Karla
powerful
I too have ro revise one of my old memorable poems.

thanks for sharing
William
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 9/2/2003
Powerful statement, Karla.
Reviewed by Christine Morell 9/2/2003
Strong and moving piece karla. Excellent
Love
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 9/2/2003
Karla...very very touchy write!!!!
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 9/2/2003
Powerfully touching...
Hugs
Jenni
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/1/2003
Powerful one karla. Thanks for sharing this. I can never forget. Your friend......Ron.... Have a great rest of the week karla...
Reviewed by Denise Edwards 9/1/2003
You said a mouthful! Thanks for writing this.

~~~love: Denise
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/1/2003
This was excellently written Karla!!

Love tinka
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 8/31/2003
Ty for sharing your words with us, they always make me think, keep up the great work...
God Bless
~Michelle~
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/31/2003
Powerful emotional piece, Karla!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/31/2003
This was excellent Karla,

Reindeer
Reviewed by jude forese 8/31/2003
well done!
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 8/31/2003
Excellent. Damn good write Karla! ~SH~
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 8/31/2003
Nicely done.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/31/2003
A powerhouse of a write Karla! Very moving!
Reviewed by Evelyn Simon 8/31/2003
That was a damn good write! :0)
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 8/31/2003
Powerful, powerful write! {{{{hugs}}}
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/31/2003
(((karla)))

>tears < :( raw, real, heartbreaking, heartfelt, emotional write that grabs and won't let go--love the flow and rhyming, and style this is written in--hip hop brimming with anger. well done, i will always remember and never forget, and "god bless america again!" :( ((((((HUGS)))))) and love, your twin sister, karen lynn. :(
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