|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|What did you expect from all these charming ladies,
after all your melt-in-the-mouth love poems???
Did you think they would all prefer to read something
more sedate...like maybe the War in the far east, or
the morning news headlines???
If you pour syrup on the hot sidewalk, the ants WILL come!
Hee hee hee...
|Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
|Wow. When are you going to write a book? I hope you are submitting your work to chapbook contests because I think you would definately win!|
|Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
|haha...whoa...this is great!
|Reviewed by Digital Fairy
|Oh my goodness, I have the cheeziest grin on my face after reading this... You are quite the seducer... :)
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Sigh...this is so unique...absolutely beautiful. Great write, Double "H".
|Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
|This is awesome!|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|You are charming to write something like this, excellent.
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Beautiful use of words to say what you mean! Outstanding poem. ~Z~|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|You shouldn't be so charming, she just can't leave you alone!! Enjoyed this very much.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is a extremely charming poem! Great write!|
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|Oh, you ARE a charmer - how in the world could she resist your words?|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
This is (again) Outstanding! It's so cleverly crafted - almost, teasing, yet has such an underlying tenderness!
You've stolen my heart!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very charming indeed...|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Wow, this is wonderful, Handsum! Very original and teasingly pleasing! I love it!|
|Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
|Sounds like someone is stalking you. It appears like she has something for you but you don't feel the same. Having a charming women chasing you is flattering -- and this is a nice way to gently break her heart.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|beautifully written Ron, I loved this,
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Beautiful as always...
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Uuuuummmmm....It will be hard for any ladies to leave you alone...
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Wow, this was really an hypnotic erotic.
Excellent write. :0)
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Must I????? ;)
a beautiful, emotion filled write.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Handsum, if you insist! ;-)this is delightful, so well written,and hopefully she will ask you to make good on all those things. I would;-)!!!|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Handsum, This is a very touching write! Loved this! ~SH~|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|I am going to follow you to the ends of the earth !!! Oooooooppps, sorry, you weren't speaking to me. [smiles]
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|oh, Hart! This is highly original. You've found your 'voice' and use it with fine consistency.
|Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
|... full of delicious suggestions.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Oh gosh handsome she will love thie!!!!!!!!!!|