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| Reviewed by Afrika Abney |
9/4/2003 |
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| It is a great write, nice flow and easy to read. Thanks for sharing this piece with us. One Love |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
9/2/2003 |
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| Caught this one right as it was about to fall off the page…Extremely passionately written Your love of words is evident in all you pen Melissa…You are amongst the finest I've read. thank you…Dani |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
9/2/2003 |
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Oh...these are words placed in perfection. A marvelous write indeed!
~Jackie~
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
9/2/2003 |
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Another choice write, Melissa...the imagery is priceless.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
9/2/2003 |
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Excellent write
enjoyable poetry
William |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
9/2/2003 |
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OUTSTANDING POETRY! Everything you say here is like a blood curdling scream. Your work is excellent and rips at the the things we fear as humans. EXCELLENT EXCELLENT WORK! I enjoyed reading these verses. My mind was filled with all sorts of images!
Thank you,
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
9/2/2003 |
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This was outstanding, excellently written!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
9/2/2003 |
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| Outstanding - love the ending! |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
9/2/2003 |
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| Excellent write...choice! |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
9/2/2003 |
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| Fabulous great rhyme and flow ! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
9/2/2003 |
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| most excellent! :D (((HUGS))) to you and the kiddos...love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Marco Landi |
9/2/2003 |
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Drawn from heaven, cursed of hell
thy will be thine alone…
For no man has the power to sway
each choice is ours to own.
Wonderful start great poem brava Marco
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
9/2/2003 |
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| Melissa, outstanding. Always love reading your poetry. You've never disappointed me. |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
9/2/2003 |
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A pleasure to read this inspiring piece!
~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) |
9/1/2003 |
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It all boils down to choices.
Make them, own them, and live with them. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/1/2003 |
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| excellent choice of imagery and a very profound ending... |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/1/2003 |
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Excellent poetry Melissa!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Aamie Burnley |
9/1/2003 |
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| ... nice one, melissa!!! |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
9/1/2003 |
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Bravo. Bravo! Your depth is Outstanding and your deliverance... phenomenal!
Stay inspired!
Tami |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/1/2003 |
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| Always impeccable poetry in this Den of Rives!;-) |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
9/1/2003 |
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Powerful, profound and written perfectly.
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
9/1/2003 |
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Our choice to fill. Great write, Melissa.
Best regards,
Leland |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
9/1/2003 |
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| Great write! |
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